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Reviews for Giving in to Draco Malfoy

By : Thedarkunicorn
  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 31, 2011
    Amusing (morbid I suppose) how Lucius suddenly walks in and tells her that her two best friends were already murdered. Pretty abrupt and taciturn of him.
    And it was Lucius' spoiling-his-son that saved Hermione... sort of :)
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  • From ANON - simfan42 on March 02, 2009
    I just wanted you to know that this is probably my favorite Draco/Hermione oneshot I've ever read. I love your writing and I've read all your stories. I really wish you would write some more. =]
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  • From margaritama on February 22, 2009
    Sigh, just re-read it and am hoping for that Epilogue...I hope they made a semblance of a life. She is the brightest witch of her age and extremely powerful. I would think after Voldemort won that he'd eventually recognize that. I think she and Draco would produce very very powerful children, which is what Voldemort would want in the long-term: magically strong children to build a strong wizarding society. Despite his denial, he knows he's a half-blood and I think part him respects Hermione's power. Anyway, sorry for the long as review.
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  • From margaritama on December 30, 2008
    "Draco felt a slight moment of guilt as he saw her crying... he would make it up to her later..." Well this is the moment he decided to keep her, isn't it.

    I would love some more chapters building on this. An epilogue with a few years down the road would be so great. It's obvious from this initial piece that he's perhaps always wanted her (though maybe not enough to save her from her potential initial fate? or did he hope she'd escape?) and the fact that he protected her spoke volumes. When Draco doesn't need to deal with things first hand, he just pretends it didn't happen, didn't exist or is someone else's worry. However when faced with a situation like the one with Hermione his conscience comes into play.

    I would encourage you to write a followup chapter if you have time. LOVE your Living in Darkness story - but prefer your revised ending.

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  • From margaritama on October 22, 2008
    beyond hot...yep, so Draco to keep what he first claimed. write an epilogue....hopefully one where she and he have a semblance of a life - I can totally see Voldemort letting Hermione live and be married to Draco - she's a very powerful witch (muggleborn or not) and would be his only exception. But she has to produce those magically powerful babies for him.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 18, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From nvywf2005 on August 09, 2007
    Awesome, that was really good. Yes, I would like to read more :)
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  • From Imnotgivingmyrealnameaway on July 17, 2007
    It's fantastic!!!
    I loved it...and to confirm it, I want to ask you a very big favour: I'm an Italian fanwriter...I'd like to translate your fanfiction for an italian site, but I need your permission. I'm new of this site, so I haven't understood how to contact you by e-mail yet, because it's hidden, but I give you my address, so you can contact me, if you want your ff translated: mref.cat@gmail.com
    hope to have your answer as soon as possible.
    Maud
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  • From ichiruki on July 16, 2007
    Love it. Very dark, would love to know what would happen in an epilogue.
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  • From luvhp on July 16, 2007
    well, that was one hell of a total whim.
    Done very well. Very exciting and Hot!
    Too bad it's a one shot. Could be very interesting living in Malfoy's bed. Hee Hee
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  • From willowgirl on July 16, 2007
    Please make this into a very long story, don't stop. I don't think I have ever read a story that has Hermione at Malfoy Manor as Draco sex slave. That would be so hot. I loved the way you wrote this story so I know you would do a great job. Think about doing it please.
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  • From JaynaM on July 16, 2007
    Loved it!

    Jayna
    xx
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  • From DarkLady on July 16, 2007
    did =dead sorry tired :D
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  • From DarkLady on July 16, 2007
    um
    that was just confusing...I liked the whole premise about Draco making Hermione watch Blaise and Pansy but it felt like you tried to get too much into the story. I think it would have been better if you hadn't added the bit with Lucius and saying all her friends were did because it didn't really make sense. One minute she's doing patrol and all is well, ten minutes later all her friends are dead and she's at Malfoy Manor?Hmm I didn't buy it, but the lemons were good you had a ton of spelling mistakes though just off the top of my head I think when you meant to say 'shut' you actually have 'shit'
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