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Reviews for A War at the End of the World

By : strangefic
  • From Vittani on July 27, 2007
    Ooh the plot thickens. I really liked that. Too often characters like Blaise and Ron have no depth, but these two had more than depth hun. Brilliant chapter definitely cant wait for the next one.
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  • From Amessis on July 27, 2007
    I really enjoyed that! Well done again.
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  • From NightLo on July 27, 2007
    Well, the spell was...dark, I must admit...it really seemed those that Lucius Malfoy would use to connect and control Narcissa, in fear of others' advancement and infidelity...(though I highly doubted would that happen)...

    However, the love of Blaise is so deep, would you explain how that has developed? We knew about some of Ron's feelings, but how about Blaise? And what is Blaise? A dragon? And does Ron know about that?

    Lastly, for those that said not loving the idea of submissive Harry, I would like to say...there are many to support your idea. And submissive (in bed) is not equal to weak/fragile, it is just a show of love...maybe there should read more about Japanese comics and fictions, they have great definition of aggressive submissive - and that was really hot!!!

    Please update soon!
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  • From dracoharry4life on July 27, 2007
    I don't see things that way either! When everything comes out, and he finds out they are all working together to save Harry, maybe he will see it a different way. They are working to save Harry...right?
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  • From FrogDemons on July 27, 2007
    Wow, I absolutly love your fanfiction. I wish that one day I can write like you but sadly I don't think I am at that level just yet. I just started my new and first fanfiction ever so yeah. ^^ I am happy since I have recieved 7 reviews already so I guess that is good. Sorry if you think if this is a weird request but by any chance can you be my beta? If yes can you drop me a review saying that you can and if no I understand*nods and hugs* Oh, here is a cookie*Hands one to you* For a job well done. ^^
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  • From DracoHarry on July 27, 2007
    I am really enjoying this story. I hope you continue with it and tell us what Blaise is. You hinted that he was something, but you didn't tell us what, or was I just reading into that a little to much. Keep up the great work.
    kat
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 27, 2007
    Then why was Blaise pointing a wand at him? Sooo need chapter 7!
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  • From BeautifulVoice on July 26, 2007
    I am really enjoying your story. I like the mixture of humor, romance and drama.

    What are you looking for in a beta? I'm good at spotting plot holes and spelling mistakes. If you want that kind of beta, you can e-mail me at beautifulvoice at gmail dot com.

    -Lily
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 26, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 6! That is some way to shake hands!
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  • From lovemeplease on July 25, 2007
    Update soon
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  • From Vittani on July 25, 2007
    A Foxxy little read! Oh no dear i am afraid i must disagree. This is a full blown gigantic wolf of a read! This is definitely one of the best things i've read in a long time. I love the relationship between Harry and Draco, i think its going to be a very interesting relationship. I always think that in a relationship the sub is the more powerful and dangerous because they've got to protect their young. Anyway i think this is brilliant the banter between Voldie and Dumbles was truly well written. I dont think you really need a beta i saw very few spelling or grammar mistakes but if you feel you need one, i'd love to do it. Email me if you want, if you'd prefer someone else then thats fine too. But dont in anyway think your writing is let down by bad grammar and spelling. I have read some truly appalling fics and this definitely isnt one of them.

    Vittani@aol.com

    p.s. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From Selera on July 25, 2007
    Dang this is hot keep hot up. Also I can't wait for the ministry attack.
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  • From ScottyToledo on July 25, 2007
    Hmmmm, somehow I don't think Ron's going to care if Harry and Draco are together. Since he is together with Draco's BEST FRIEND.
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  • From Amessis on July 25, 2007
    Well done again! I love their methog of "shaking hands". Kind of feel bad for Hermione- makes you want to slap Ron until he notices her.
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  • From NightLo on July 25, 2007
    ...really, what a new definition of action...
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