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Reviews for Unknotting a String Bikini

By : Marti
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 30, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From pittwitch on August 02, 2007
    Goodness, gracious, I need some lemonade, or lemon aid, or to go back to the beach. Fantasy sex on a beach ... so much better than actually trying to figure out how that sand got THERE! Love ya Girl! Thanks for sharing. Pitt
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  • From ANON - Kylie on July 25, 2007
    Haha, that was cute, and funny! I really enjoy your writing :)
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  • From kmplease on July 22, 2007
    that was awesome, and funny can't wait for your next story
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  • From shelagh on July 20, 2007
    Wonderful as always Marti!!!! Keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2007
    wow. one of your best.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2007
    wow. one of your best.
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  • From Clare1984 on July 19, 2007
    Wow - hot! and I don't just mean the sand! I loved this one, I like Snape being naughty and having some fun. Do you think you could be persuaded to do a few more about their honeymoon, just for fun especially that one with the see through bikini. That sounds like it would be really good!
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  • From bluemoongurl628 on July 19, 2007
    that was funny. you should consider a sequel with them swimming in the water. well written, i like the descriptions it makes me want to go to cancun really badly lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2007
    Very short and sweet story. Snape? On the beach? In a tight little bathing suit? My fantasy come true. I really enjoyed it. Please write some more.
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