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  • From TalonLongbottom on November 16, 2007
    Loved it! Ducks and Frogs!! That's going to be my new catchfrase!

    ~Stephanie
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  • From theorgskittles on November 16, 2007
    Cant wait for more I think you are doing good so far Duck's and frogs are good how about for the girl unicorn's hehehe I love unicorns sorry had to say it
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  • From jraskin on November 15, 2007
    Update Soon! I really wanna see what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - Ox King on November 14, 2007
    Thanks for updating your story. I was hoping that it wasn't going to go to the wayside like may others.
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  • From ANON - Sirius's_girl on November 14, 2007
    So I just read the whole story in one sitting, well two really but that's not the point.
    The point is that I have many points right now.
    1) I loved it when Hermione slapped Snape! That was great.
    2) This is a great piece of fiction. One of the most thought out and well written Remus/Hermione fics I have been able to get my greedy little hands on in quite some time.
    3) Two boys and a girl, nice twist there.
    4) Can't wait to read the rest.
    And last
    5) I kinda feel sorry for Remus, passing out and all. Oh well.
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  • From Sampdoria on November 14, 2007
    Thank you for the update! So triplets huh, well why not. I to hope though that you will have Severus as the father, I just think both Hermione and the children would be better of with Severus as the father. I look forward for the next chapter so update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - j on November 14, 2007
    I love this fic so i was excited when you updated!! THX!! and more soon plz... ducks and frogs so the nursery is gonna have a pond look??? i like that severus is being responsiable enough to want to stay around. thx for entertaining
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 14, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 14, 2007
    Thank you for updating. I enjoyed this chapter. I think Hermione scratching Severus was a bit extreme, but like he said he deserved it. I look forward to reading more to see what types of things are bought for the babies that have ducks and frogs.
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  • From TalonLongbottom on November 12, 2007
    DUDE! I was screaming when she said that there was a third child. Keep going with the story..Me like! I want more, must have more!

    ~Talon Longbottom
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  • From ANON - jacobsboo on November 11, 2007
    I really really liked it update soon! Oh shit Remus probably pissed his pants! I wished I was there!!
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  • From inmydreamworld on October 24, 2007
    lol that was hilarious, two identical boys... and a girl... lol, you know with concieving like that its actually possibly for snape and malfoy both to be at least one of the kids dad. This was a very good read, ill be hoping to see more soon! =)
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  • From theorgskittles on October 18, 2007
    I can not wait for a update on this story... it is really good Your bf had a nice idea why not make it where she is haveing tripletts that was sneaky to bad he did not suggest 2 of each lol
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  • From VampireSeductress on October 05, 2007
    update soon!
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  • From ANON - ryuuko on September 28, 2007
    I liked your story so far but the whole three-kids-thing is - pardon my french - bloody stupid. To have identical twins and a third kid there has to be two eggs, both fertilized, and one of these eggs has to part to create the identical twins. Both the two-fertilized-eggs and the egg-parting scenario can happen, though it is rare. But to have both happen at the same time? No way. And don't you think that SOMEONE with experience (or even Hermione herself) would have noticed that there is more than one kid? Especially three! Three kids are thrice as large and heavy. I wouldn't be surprised if you would even let them have both Severus AND Lucius as a father. Just to make it even more impossible and unreal.
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