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Reviews for To Save A Serpent

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - Jessie Deal on September 28, 2015
    This was actually very good. Yes, a bit confusing, and I kept excecting him to un-die in the middle. But you've cleared it up very well with the 'last thing' and having them share one more moment together, admitting their love, was beautiful. Very much loved the epilogue, too. really well made
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  • From Recordkeeper on December 06, 2010
    this was a great story. i loved it and she is going to hell for killing off one of the best characters EVER. I have been reading all of your work and i love that all of it is different. you dont run the same plot line with the same problems and the same solutions every story. which i only bring up because other authors with many stories within the same fandom seem to make a habit of it. anyways i love it.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 09, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From mlui on May 17, 2008
    This is such a sad story! It made me mourn and grieve for Severus all over again...I just couldn't help crying. It's such a well written story and it just worked. I usually don't like stories that go from present to the past and then present to past using flashbacks. But you've done a superb job and it really worked! Usually, I can't stand the stories that incorporate more than two flashbacks but I really have to commend you on a job well done! I also have to applaud sticking to DH and the epilogue, only tweaking it to suit the Severus/Hermione pairing. =) 10/10
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  • From chickaboo on October 18, 2007
    This was....so beautifully heartbreaking. I love your writing style and can't wait to read more by you. Thank you for sharing this. You had me crying from the start.
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  • From ANON - aspotter on September 30, 2007
    oh crap i cried so hard.
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  • From DB1 on September 16, 2007
    wow that was sad but sweet. i cried at the end, i wish they could have been together but oh well. awesome story i loved it!!


    *DB*
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Ryu on August 25, 2007
    That was beautiful, truly truly beautiful. I cried a veritable river when it was done( and when I was busy reading it). And don't feel that you're the only one that cried at the end of the book. For about a week after I finished the book I only had to think of Severus as dead and I would start crying. This could be very akward as I would be sitting in my Philosophy class for example while our professor went on about Heidegger or someone equally important and I would suddenly feel the tears coming in my eyes as I thought about Severus gone forever. My friends were quite alarmed that I was crying over philosophy.The same happened in a Linguistics class, it was quite embaressing. Or even over lunch.>_
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  • From xRoseSongweaverx on August 22, 2007
    Wow, I am sooooo glad that you stuck to yourself. Even if it made all the rabid Give-Severus-Snape-A-Miracle shippers mad. This was a great ending to a great story. And I am so glad that you gave Hermione the strength of character to choose life. I couldn't have written it better, and don't know any other author that could have either. Marvelous job.

    PS. Thanks for your reviews on my story! You gave me the motivation to re-hash out the next chapter, which is slowly eatting my soul and will to write... haha
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on August 21, 2007
    This has been a truly inspirational piece of work. It was sad, happy, inspiring and gut wrenching all rolled up in one. In short...it was a fantastic ride. Thanks!

    Red

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2007
    What a sad chapter! Great work though.
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 21, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From chochang on August 19, 2007
    This is a terrific story... I really didn't know what to expect, having first seen your name in a comment of a story. I disagreed with you, but really, this story is marvelous. I love it.
    It keeps me anticipating at every chapter, and you have a talent with dialogue.
    I'm actually confused about what's happening so far, especially with the Hermione in the coffin, but then again, I can be dense. I'm sure everything will be explained later on.
    Continue asap :D
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  • From ANON - Ryu on August 18, 2007
    That was so sad.I'm just wondering if ur planning on sticking to the cannon version...according to cannon she has her first child at 25. Although...I was right about her being pregnant!!!!
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