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Reviews for A New Beginning (DH -COMPLIANT)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From kmplease on August 21, 2007
    scary, please dont let tom corrupt him!! please update soon!!
    love your website!!
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  • From kmplease on August 21, 2007
    nice, talking about your sex life... weird, but love it all the same

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  • From ANON - lala_land on August 21, 2007
    ohh my god that was so sweet More more more
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  • From ANON - Barbara on August 21, 2007
    A peck on the cheek was a great start. I hope things start to progress now that they have gotten the first "date" out of the way.
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  • From ANON - Flarie on August 21, 2007

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  • From SorceressFujin on August 21, 2007
    HEHEHE, another excellent chapter! (as always!) :D
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  • From Ms_Figg on August 21, 2007
    Ele: Thanks for pointing that out. Kind of tired. Yeah, a little meat hurts nothing. :) you know, one of my most popular snippets is the one where Severus prefers large women. I got a lot of positive emails about that. Being a big girl myself, I go where I know. ;) Screw underrepresentation. lol. ***
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  • From Ele on August 21, 2007
    "Snape and Severus retired to his study"

    I've been noticing that for quite a while but since the chapter is all about it it's just right to bring it up now: I really like that you emphasize the fact that attractive does not automatically mean skinny. And yes you're right: that is something especially younger men tend to say (although my father has this way of looking me up and down and saying 'doesn't really get less, eh?', too and I'm far from having too much weight... *shakes head*).
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  • From SorceressFujin on August 21, 2007
    Excellent! :D
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  • From phistolemon on August 21, 2007
    I can only encourage you further and say I like the way it's going :)

    severus isn't really feeling some kind of love for hermione (yet), is he?
    it doesn't sound to me like that yet, but however it's cute to see how he
    tries to approach her a little. I hope he won't make some terrible mistakes,
    I take it hermione could still be really sensitive about ron etc..

    it will be interesting to see severus experience real love (and live it) and not just
    'casual sex' - at least I hope that'll happen one day between him and hermione ;)
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  • From Ms_Figg on August 21, 2007
    As far as the intimate setting, he made it appear they were "celebrating her success" rather than it being a romantic dinner. Saying, "call me Severus, Hermione" here, to me anyway, would have been awkward because there was no basis for that dramatic change. He told her he preferred being called by his former title. Why would he suddenly change this preference? This was still a business-based dinner, albeit a very nice one. Or that was what he wanted Hermione to think though they did talk about very personal matters.
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  • From Ms_Figg on August 21, 2007
    I've never seen Snape as someone who allows anyone to use his given name unless there's a good reason for it. It is his last bastion of "reserve." I've written countless stories where Hermione and he are having sex, and she still calls him Professor. lol. Don't ask me why but it seemed suitable. Besides, this way, when he finally does tell Hermione to call him "Severus" you can be sure there's a damn good reason for it.
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  • From DarqueHart on August 21, 2007
    Yelling at her to eat seemed right on, to me. Severus wouldn't blurb out romantic nonsense, especially at their first meal together. I'm surprised though that he didn't insist, in this private setting, that she call him by his first name. All this 'Professor-ing' is not conducive to a friendlier atmosphere. It's like a wall between them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2007
    Lovely chapter. Can't wait fo rmore.
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 21, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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