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Reviews for What Do You Expect?

By : NormanCharles
  • From ANON - anonymous on December 08, 2016

    now that i think about it you're right. he left two HORMONAL teenagers in a tent for weeks. one of which is his GIRLFRIEND and the other is his BEST FRIEND who he just ABANDONDED and he didnn't think this would happen. i would love to see a scene where ron returns just as they''re kissing.


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  • From pettybureaucrat on July 02, 2008
    Wouldn't expect anything else. Hot and sexy!
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  • From XDracoMalfoyLoverX on April 13, 2008
    I really liked this story, I hope you continue it! It was my only problem throughout the HP books that sex was never even hinted at which seemed really unrealistic in a boarding school of mixed sex teenagers where the girls could get into the boys dorms even if not the other way around. Loads of different ages read HP so I understand JK couldn't actually talk about sex, but I thought it could at least have been hinted at, younger readers wouldn't have picked up on it.
    I thought this was a great missing scene to DH, something that most likely would have happened in reality. Good job!
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  • From luvhp on December 04, 2007
    Fact: Two very healthy teenagers left alone for weeks(even a long weekend) on end WILL wind up together, especially if they have love and respect for each other :)
    Great story!
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  • From Lisa1352 on August 18, 2007
    I remember being a teenager .. hell I've had boysfriend who could have sex 5 times a day and they were in there 20s..
    they say in war people become closer for love and support and thinking they may die at any time and the sex is better too... or something like that.
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  • From harrystrulove on August 09, 2007
    That was hot! Loved it! You're right, some people need to get a clue. If anybody here doesn't like to see HP characters featured in sexual stories, then they shouldn't be here to begin with. Bloody hypcrites! Anyway, awesome story!
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  • From Sinkingboat on August 05, 2007
    I am one, but I don't see myself having sex for the hell of it. Though Harry and Hermione are dif story. Enjoyed it. Hope to see more.
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  • From abc123wizard on July 30, 2007
    That is one of the best one shots i've read on this story, belivable, just enough plot and very well written. Very well done.
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  • From Bigfunk89 on July 29, 2007
    This was a great story and damn right what you said this is what really would have happened between Hermione and Harry during the course of DH and jumping from camp to camp around like that during practically the whole novel. Please make more of these kinds of stories between Harry and Hermione. Thanks for the story hope to read more soon!!!
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  • From on July 27, 2007
    Nice fic! Thank you, thank you for stating one of my problem with that part of the book, which coincides with Harry picturing a girl in a wedding dress. It's just not realistic!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
    Well, they seemed to get a bit ooc as the story progressed.. But you're definetly not the only one wanting them to hook up back in the tent. xD
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  • From Mitamay on July 25, 2007
    Weeellll, I gotta admit, I've wondered about that myself; it'd sure be hard on me too, after awhile. I mean, they were together for months, even up until X-mas, I think.

    Oh hell yeah, I would've given in! *grins* It just amazes me how so many fics came out after the book, esp. in response to the epilogue! EM
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  • From egb67 on July 24, 2007
    Nice! I've read half the book and this is exactly the issue that bothered me. I love what you've done with this. It's straightforward, but..not. It's also very satisfying to read, so I'd love to see you write more :)

    Regards,

    the_scribbler
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  • From kmplease on July 24, 2007
    totally agree with you, come on teenagers get horny, life and death situation, maybe harry and hermione decided to up their friendship, love your story, please write more
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  • From lycus on July 23, 2007
    First off that was great and I can't wait for more now I hope that ron didn't take hermiones' virginity beacause she had no reaction of being uncomfortable or new to sex, now as for DH I bought the book and for the first time I went strait to the back and was so repulsed by what I read that I still haven't really read the book just read a few parts of it and haven't picked it up scense I put it down, Unfortuneately I blame fanfiction I mean that after their 5th year everyone figured out that Harry and Hermione would get together and so many authors wrote stories GOOD stories that it made whatever JKR wrote look stupid by compairason so she changed everything thats why HBP didn't have the same feel as the other books and as for DH she had to change rons' behavior so much that even ron fans were saying what the hell happened to him and in no way would a book get ron and hermione together beacause even if it did it WOULDN'T last for more than five minutes before they started fighting again, so to rid our minds from the train wreck that was deathly hallows please continue your story.
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