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Reviews for Hopeless Love

By : Mistaken
  • From oogies4u on August 10, 2007
    please please do go on,, am almost drooling at the idea you planted.

    this could be the start of a beautufull relationship .. with all the snark and love in between.

    DragZ
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  • From katecooley on August 01, 2007
    This is definitely good! I'd love another chapter!
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  • From ANON - poisonivy on July 29, 2007
    Gee, I like it, it's exactly what i've been looking for, Snape alive again! thanks!
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on July 27, 2007
    This isn't a bad story. It's really rather amusing. I'm sure it has great potential. You do have a few... errors, but from I read, they weren't grammatical or spelling errors... They were just punctuation errors. No biggies. So, update soon again. And btw, most of those questions that Harry asked Snape I really wanted answers to after I finished reading the book. Sadly JKR didn't quite answer them in her book so I'm really excited to see what you're going to do. Good luck and update soon, K?
    Zega
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
    It's good but you should change the summary. I'm not sure if you already did and just didn't change it well enough, but it still gives away that Snape died. You can change it by going to 'Your Control Panel', then going to 'edit story', then in the first drop down click on the story, and in the second click on 'edit details'.

    Also I've noticed that there are spaces in between every sentence. It's not a terrible thing, but it makes it a little annoying to read, at least for me anyway. Other than that, I didn't really notice any major errors but I wasn't really looking for them either...

    It's good, like I said, just those two things I would change if I were you. If you would like a beta, I can, though after today my time will be a bit scarce but if I can't get a chapter back in a timely manner I would let you know. My email is BlackenedNightshade@yahoo.com

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  • From ANON - Gothic on July 26, 2007
    this is really interesting not bad for a beginer
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  • From Vittani on July 25, 2007
    ok first of all you definitely dont need a beta. Second, this is bloody amazing. I was dead pissed Lupin died but i can definitely overlook that to read this, especially since Snape is alive. The idea is definitely orriginal and i want more
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on July 25, 2007
    I just finished the book at 3:12 this morning, and I wanted to cry when Snape died, I kept hoping, like in here as I've just read, that he'd show up and Harry could applagise, and everything would be ok. T-T WHY DID SHE HAVE TO KILL HIM?! I'm more upset about his death then Dumbledore, Lupin, Or Tonks, the only that upset me this much was Sirius. This fic is cheering me up kinda though, and so did the chapter The Prince's Tale. I'm gonna go find more fics, keep updating this, I need the comfort now.
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  • From Mistaken on July 24, 2007
    Oh my gosh, I am soo sorry!!! I didn't even realize that I had a spoiler in my summary!!! I know you are all probably royally pissed but I am reallllly sorry!
    Sorry!
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  • From DBZVelena on July 24, 2007
    It has merit.
    I'd love to read more.
    I just think you've written Harry a bit wimpy. I mean, he fainted?!?!
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  • From ANON - Kawaai Neko on July 24, 2007
    Interesting plot twist, im intreagd to reed more.
    ~Kawaai Neko~
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  • From Severine on July 24, 2007
    Cool, i think is has potential.
    Can't wait to read further. I'd love to see where it's heading.
    Keep on writing, and thank you.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 24, 2007
    Oh my oh my oh my

    I love it already, cant wait for the next chapter so update soon
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  • From tippi on July 23, 2007
    Don
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  • From ANON - jam-jam on July 23, 2007
    good story, only thing, if you want to avoid spoilers, you may want to change your description on the main page... you kind of spoiled it for those who don't know Snape dies.
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