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Reviews for My Nice Little Whore

By : Daktalakpak
  • From GiaDarcy on July 24, 2007
    I didn't find it too confusing. There were a couple parts that I had to stop and think about though lol. For some reason, I loved the part where Draco was dancing around his room. I could picture that perfectly lol. Great job!
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 24, 2007
    Harry went from lust and hope to just walking away. Draco goes from loving to raging rape. Now Harry is needy and desperate. Talk about unusual.
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  • From MisstressNicole on July 24, 2007
    This is a surprisingly good story. The only problem is you need a beta. It's not confusing as far as the story goes as it is confusing in grammar. "You don't do nothing" "I don't know what homework I got," "go to sleep to our own dorms." Nothing big but still they catch the eye. I did like the story and this isn't a flame, it's just a little friendly help. Thank you for writing this and I look forward to reading the next installment if there is to be one.

    ~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
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  • From ZooArmy on July 24, 2007
    Draco as a little psycho stalker, interesting. Also I'm not fond of rape scenes, it was acceptable. And I don't think it's confusing, just that Harry gave in so easy that was a bit confusing if not implausible. I mean, he was raped after all. But of course, if he wasn't directly raped (if you know what i mean) but only 'played' it, it's more plausible.
    I ramble, don't i?
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