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By : snapescauldron
  • From CryingCinderella on August 16, 2007
    Dearest Love,

    You're killing me! -dies theatrically and dramatically- One tiny, sweet little kiss! Ack! -dies again- And he wasn't supposed to be falling for her! He told himself he wouldn't! But hey, who am I to complain? At least there's some romantic action going on. Yay. I'm sure he's a fantastic cook, by the way. Your attention to detail throughout this story is fascinating. And I just love how readily Josiah, which is still a gorgeous name, takes to "Siw" it's adorable. And I could totally see that tickle scene, just played out so beautifully, tickling the son, then the mother, and Hermione just being all flushed and beside herself on the floor. And that adorable little kiss! Ah! -faints- So wonderful. -drools in anticipation for the next chapter- Normally, I'm far more articulate, but you've got that raw need rolling, now, dear. I hope the next chapter is filled with awkward fumbling kisses and touching, and lots of blushing and dialogue, I love it when dialogue can be well played into a scene like that. And well, so what if he's dead? If he's dead, he's dead. It did occur to me that perhaps, and just perhaps, he could have a happy, blissful life with Silvano Scolari, as he is. Perhaps Severus Snape really is dead, and although Hermione may or may not discover that he has reinvented his life as Silvano, couldn't their lives as lovers and a family exist as they are? It seems to be perfect so far. But you do as you wish, I can't wait! And by the way, I updated custody battle, just for you! :)

    ~CC
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  • From Alabaster on August 16, 2007
    aww my heart raced with that sweet but simple kiss. You must feed me another chapter before I die of hunger!
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on August 16, 2007
    Awwww, That was just so sweet. I really am enjoying this story. I cant wait for more.

    Red
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  • From Alabaster on August 16, 2007
    oh yes! another chapter (or three) and grand was it indeedy :D I cant wait for another installment! Please hurry :D
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  • From kmplease on August 16, 2007
    omg, that was so great!!
    never liked lavander to begin with, so yea,
    please snape fall out of love with hermione, not a chance!!
    please update soon!!
    ps: loved that the children sided with hermione,
    keep up the good work
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  • From RoseEvans on August 16, 2007
    THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for the update.
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on August 16, 2007
    o you're awful! still just leaving it off! update soon!
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  • From Ele on August 16, 2007
    *Waiting eagerly to see how this goes on*
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  • From ANON - emily on August 16, 2007
    great progress. keep going! i think this is my favorite fic right now..
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 16, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From CryingCinderella on August 15, 2007
    Dear lords that was intense! I do feel so awestruck by the fact that just- just- wow. Yay for Silvano! And dear gods he cannot let himself fall out of love. My question is, are they going to have a little 'fun' or something more serious, either way you look at it, before she figures out who he is? (I don't want to say it here, just in case Hermione sneaks out of the story and reads my review. hehe) But I mean, could that make him realize? If she perhaps...kisses him, or maybe something a little more. Thank you so very much for updating those two wonderful chapters, I can hardly wait for more. I love they way you've played Lavender out, she's a fantastic character that we love to hate. :) You've got Molly right on cue as well. I do apologize for not updating on anything at the moment, it's not that I'm not trying but technological updates have set me back. My laptop is broken atm so I've been bouncing around from friend's notebook to computer lab to internet cafe (I'm in a foreign country at the moment) finding it difficult to get things accomplished that way. For Custody Battle I cannot update until the laptop is fixed (supposedly tomorrow) because the next chapter is all but three lines finished and saved on said laptop. I'm working on To Save A Serpent as we speak. I do appreciate the loyalty, and I graciously appreciate the amazing story you've got going here. I cannot wait to read more and I do hope that they get to have a bit of fun soon, either with her knowing him or not, it doesn't matter, she deserves a break. A fancy dinner, a back rub, and a good shag sort of break. ~wink~ Keep up the fantastic story!

    ~CC
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2007
    Nono falling out of love silly Severus.

    Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From angelnomiko on August 15, 2007
    wow .. im glad she told him her real name .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From Sampdoria on August 15, 2007
    Loved the update!
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  • From ANON - neko33 on August 15, 2007
    finally!!! Yay!! Hurry and write more! what happens when hermoine finds out? update soon!
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