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By : snapescauldron
  • From CryingCinderella on August 10, 2007
    See now you're just torturing us. I felt like that chapter, while very entertaining, could have been left out? Like a deleted scene in a movie? I mean, don't get me wrong, I loved it, and while it does tell key components to the story, we're all just waiting for you to get Hermione's arse with Josiah (lovely name btw) to Silvano's!!! I mean, the anticipation is killing me! Will she recognize him? Will her recognize her? Certainly at least the latter if not the former as well. You play your characters well, though I do hope that Josiah makes such a fuss when going to visit Ron & Lavender that Ron just says to hell with it and he can stay with Hermione. Divorce isn't always neat and clean and Hermione could totally win out if she had to take Josiah from Ron, and honestly? Ron was cheating on Hermione before Josiah was born, and he didn't seem much like he cared about the baby when she first told him she was pregnant, so would it really be that bad for Hermione to get a little justice and get her son? I mean, Ron is about to have his own...whatever with the cow. A baby calf I guess. :p Please update sooon! I miss your multi chapter updates, like two or four at a time, but I know when that happens it's usually a while in-between said multi chapter updates. Please! For the love of Severus! Get us to Silvano's villa in Tuscanny, and I suppose I had better make myself quite clear as you seem to be the cheeky type of author who would spend the entire next chapter getting us ready and then at the very end "getting to arriving" at the villa, so please, for the love of Severus! Get us to the villa with some moving in and some interacting between Silvano and Hermione. :) Thank you. Fantastic story.
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on August 10, 2007
    hurry up and get her to silvano!! lol i'm so glad her kids put that cow in her place!! lol ^_^ update soon PLEASE!!
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  • From Sampdoria on August 10, 2007
    Thank you for the update. Ron was quite the fool (as usual) for having Lavender at the house at this time, and she was even the bigger fool to be there. I can see that she wants to state her teritory, but you shouldn't have to many braincells to know that if you wanted any respect or positive interaction with your future housebands children, you don't disrespect their mother and you tread carefully. Lavender can never take Hermiones place with her children and the sooner Lavender realise that, there migth be a chance she wont find spiders wandering over her food when the children is around:-)) I look forward for Hermione and Severus first meeting so update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Cami on August 10, 2007
    I love it! I can't wait to see this next blowout between Hermione and Lavender. Or for when Hermione and Severus come face to face! Please Update Again Soon!
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  • From kmplease on August 10, 2007
    Drama, in the weasley house!! omg tears, i cried for the half the story, it is a really good story, please update soon!! i hate waiting!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2007
    Gosh I hate Lavendar.

    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From hpbcn on August 09, 2007
    mmm just a comment, i think you forgot that severus already guessed who nancy was a bit back. When she found out about ron, she let slip his name and lavender's while talking on the radio... i thought he made the connection back then. Aside from that, still good. Really want to see their reactions when they finally see each other, bet severus is to die for!

    hpbcn
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  • From ANON - Lulu on August 09, 2007
    I'm so intrigued to see what will happen when they finally meet! Please let there be lots of snark!
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 09, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From BinxBolling on August 09, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story. The concept is incredibly interesting. I hope you add a bit more to the chapters, though *crosses fingers and crosses heart and hopes not to get bit in the neck by a huge snake*

    rofl.


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  • From ANON - Jasmine on August 09, 2007
    I love your story! It really is different then most that I've read and original too. I can tell you how much I ethusiastically await your next chapter. I hope you update soon!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on August 09, 2007
    oh man, you are so awful leaving it there!! oh please update soon! i love this story. stupid ron bringing lavender over after he said hermoine could be over early...what a jerk!! update soon!
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 08, 2007
    The anticipation of getting to Silvano's is killing me!!!!
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  • From angelnomiko on August 08, 2007
    man .. ron should not have let her come over knowing that mione was coming back in the morning... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Ele on August 08, 2007
    Hmm, does that refer to my review? Thank you!

    I indeed had understood that they have had deep conversations. And they explain a certain deeper liking. I say it might even go as far as falling in love because of them, but... I still (personally) do not believe Severus would admit to himself to have such feelings as long as he does not know the identity (name, past) of the person in question.

    Yet that does not prevent me from liking your story very much and looking forward to the next update ^^!
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