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Reviews for The Wrong Time

By : snapescauldron
  • From DarqueHart on August 05, 2007
    I think you got the arguments and confusion written well enough, but need more emotion. Good chapter but given the subject matter of breaking divorce news to teens, Mom moving and removing youngest sibling, and the sudden announcement that Lav is going to have a baby - adding a new half sibling by The Other Woman... hurt piled on hurt ... needs a bit more!
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  • From Ele on August 05, 2007
    Too short! ;)

    (No, thank you of course!)
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on August 05, 2007
    aw, poor kids. this makes me sad... update soon!! make me happy again!
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  • From ANON - annie on August 05, 2007
    omg please for the love of god kill ron and lavender!!!! aahhhh you've made them sooooo hateable and i love it!! haha but seriously kill them off or something i hate ron and lavender together like it's not even funny!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on August 03, 2007
    i'm glad she didn't take him back! who cares what everyone else says! this is a great story, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2007
    Ron = grrr.

    I'm glad to see that Hermione will be moving closer to Severus.. ;)

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 02, 2007
    Do keep up the good work, I am rather liking this. And since I've found myself in a momentary pause of writer's block, it's helping to keep me inspired. I do wish dear Silvano would make an appearance and soon, though I'm wondering how he's going to take to a cottage full of kids. :p Hope that there is an update long before the weekend is out. (I'm in Oz so it's already Friday morning here) Keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2007
    i love love love this story. it fits quite nicly into the after the deathly hollows bussness, the only complaint i have is that your chapters are so danm short, like, it takes 5 o your chapters (at least) to make up what i would consider a decent sized chapter. but other than that, love it, never stop writing, haha.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2007
    Whooaaaa. You just created a ton of dislikable characters. Good work. ;) Loving this fic so far.
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  • From wickienchen on August 01, 2007
    great story! if i was hermione, i would be as pissed as she is (if not more)
    you are a great writer, i'd love to read more of this story!
    vic
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  • From Ele on August 01, 2007
    Tse, tse... no. I am totally on Hermione's side. Could I borrow your owl to let her know? But seeing all the hate mail she receives, my letter of approvement would probably get burned up in the pile of disapproving letters, right?

    Thanks for updating!
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  • From angelnomiko on August 01, 2007
    wow how can they do that just think of ron .. what about mione and how he hurt her..please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 31, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - sinbad on July 31, 2007
    Very good story overall. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on July 31, 2007
    update soon! PLEASE!! this is an amazing story!! stupid gits thinking hermoine is in the wrong.... ARG!! that makes me so MAD!! update soon!
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