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By : snapescauldron
  • From kmplease on August 26, 2007
    omg, love it!! whats going to happen next???
    update soon please!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 26, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - lala_land on August 26, 2007
    update?? your chapters are so little!!
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  • From ANON - lala_land on August 26, 2007
    update?? your chapters are so little!!
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  • From snapescauldron on August 26, 2007
    Just to clarify...It's been more like a few months since Molly found out about Ron......I didn't want my story to become a PWP so yes, the sex is in the background, a lot of it is implied....I don't spend my writing time trying to write out long detailed sex scenes, because I want my stories to be more about the plot, and when I spend most of my days chasing around a toddler I just don't have that kind of time. Not everyone can spend three chapters writing one lemon. I'm sorry if my story is a disappointment in that respect, but I will never write PWP...because I am just not that great with the lemons....it's really not my strong suit. I'm better at weaving the tale. I may try to edit some chapters to make the passage of time more clear, but my lemons and lack of are staying as they are. It never hurt anyone to leave some things to the imagination, which is something I like to do.
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  • From Ele on August 26, 2007
    ?????

    Enjoyable? -Nothing happened!
    And Mrs. Weasley accepting that Hermione has a new lover already after just having officially found out about her husband's affair a few days ago? -Strange. As was the rushed sex in the previous chapter...

    (Sorry, but that's my impression)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2007
    Aw yay! I'm happy that Molly is happy for her. K eep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on August 25, 2007
    excellent story
    waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - lala_land on August 25, 2007
    ok ok ok One word UPDATE
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  • From RoseEvans on August 25, 2007
    This story just keep's on getting better and better. Thank you for all the updates.
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 25, 2007
    My dear,

    Two hot lemony scenes in two chapters. Brava. Brava. I am most pleased. I have added another chapter to custody battle and am working at the kinks so to speak. I was impressed with Severus' willingness to take in the child as his own. Very impressive. I find that I like this side of him. I can only imagine what that twat lavender will say when hermione turns up pregnant, I mean that's bound to happen, though she'd older, Josiah's young, and could use another sibling around his age. Heh. I wonder how Rose and Hugo will take to this man, Severus, heh and will he remain hidden? Or shall they perhaps have a go at restoring a proper identity to him? Though they should stay in italy for certain. Brava, my congratulations on another two chapters well done. Can't wait to read more.

    ~CC
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 25, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From DarqueHart on August 24, 2007
    Wouldn't we all love a wake-up like that!! With Siw, of course. Only, while they're in the shower, they should have been writhing in pleasure, not 'writing' in pleasure;) Smut writers in the shower!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2007
    Another great chapter. Please keep up the good work and the frequent updates!
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 24, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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