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Reviews for I Give You a Wondrous Mirror

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From sunset20 on December 16, 2007
    *breathes excitedly*
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  • From sunset20 on December 16, 2007
    I have just started this story (no idea why not earlier), and I wanted to tell you that I really enjoy it. I'm only at Chapter 5, but I'm completely hooked and love reading. And, well I have a theory about what's happening and I can't help but share it with you. *grins*

    I have the sinking feeling that you (or, well, the book Draco was reading about Life-debts) haven't mentioned Time-Turners just by chance. I'm sure that will be important - time I mean. Maybe these dreams Harry has are not just dreams but visions of what could have been had he made different choices in his life. And maybe this Life-debt thing offers him a chance to change it all - or at least to see what he is missing. This "fading", I think if they let it happen they would be sucked into this different reality where they are a couple. So it would make sense that only the memory of their children holds them back because they wouldn't exist in that different reality and also that could be why Harry suffers less, his bonds to this reality are stronger because he has a good job, friends, and a good relationship with Ginny, while Draco only has his son.

    I'm very excited how this will turn out and if my theory is correct. I'm curious what else you came up with and how this ends for Harry and Draco. I'll definitely keep reading. :D
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on December 15, 2007
    That was quite a journey! Great story! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Myra on December 15, 2007
    A.m.a.z.i.n.g

    (feels sad that it's over now)

    But gods, just perfect. *salute*
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on December 15, 2007
    Ohhh! The epilogue was perfect where you incorporated the epilogue from the 7th book. Absolutely amazing!! I loved this story, every minute of it. You did a fantastic job.

    I definitely encourage you to write more.

    Congratulations, And happy holidays! :)
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  • From doorock42 on December 15, 2007
    It was interesting to see the "real" epilogue through those eyes.

    I have to run, but I wanted to say thank you for the story. I'll have a new one posted this weekend (hopefully), if you want to check it out.
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  • From Mephistedes on December 15, 2007
    Lily did a great number of things perfectly, but Harry suspected her main interest was world domination.

    ^^

    Lovely. Every last bit, lovely. I'm really going to miss seeing this story up all the time, but I'll have your others to console me, yes? ;)
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 14, 2007
    I am sooo going to miss this story! Thanks for the wonderful roller coaster ride!!!
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  • From Dezra on December 14, 2007
    Okay, I love the world of Harry and Draco...but now I feel bad for harry and draco on the other side of the mirror. THAT Harry needs a slap upside the head LOL> This was a great story. Very well done. I'm very happy to be on your mailing list.
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  • From doorock42 on December 14, 2007
    Well, I don't know what to say. After the explainofest of 42, the simple home life of 43 was just perfect. I love that you didn't make their lives perfect, either; that you reminded us they don't know everything about this world. A nice strong ending to a great piece of fanfic, one that I will probably pull out and read again someday. Oh, and before I forget: very nice sex scene. Looking forward to the epilogue...
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 14, 2007
    Can't wait for chapter 44! The ending?!! OMG!!! I am sooo going to miss this!
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  • From Mephistedes on December 13, 2007
    Goodness, I feel terribly for Other Harry and Other Draco. I wish there was some way to know how their lives turn out (unless you're mentioning that in the epilogue)...preferably where Ginny has a broom-related 'incident' and where Marian gets fried to a crisp by a dragon, and Harry and Draco find each other again and are free and clear, but that's just my little fantasy....

    Great chapter, all in all: and the part about real sex not being like their stone-floor world was brill. And Hermione said 'damn it'! ^^

    Ohh, epilogue next...I'm excited and greatly saddened at the same time. Do they really have to go? :'(
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  • From ANON - Myra on December 13, 2007
    That was beautiful. I feel sorry for the other Draco, but yeah, there's always a price to pay. It's good to know that Hermione in their world wasn't as hardened as the Hermione in their world before. And lol, I absolutely adore the idea of Lily being pampered and growing up all Malfoy-ish. XD Who knows, perhaps even James would grow up all gentlemanly, hehe. I can't believe there's only a chapter left! Waaaaaaaah. It feels sooooooooo fast. I remember chapter 1 ... bah. Great job. Really.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 11, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 43!!!
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  • From doorock42 on December 11, 2007
    First off, let me say that I totally feel for Our Heroes when Al busted their groove. As a dad, this has happened to me.

    That said...

    Okay, I understand WHY the first half of the chapter was so talky. I do. But I think the explanation was almost too complicated. And then the whole resolving-reality thing where they have to figure out their roles in all this? It screams "fish out of water". I do hope that not too much of the next couple of chapters is spent on that.

    I apologize for making this comparison, but this sort of felt like the King's Cross chapter near the end of HP:DH... like "hi there, Captain Exposition, why don't you take a seat?"

    Anyway, after reading your response to my last review, I definitely look forward to the conclusion of the story and the things I referred to -- seeing through the mirror and the "updated epilogue". And don't get me wrong, I only intend the above two paragraphs as constructive... the story as a whole is, as I've said before, most enjoyable.
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