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From ANON - Myra on October 17, 2007
This chapter showed me how very selfish Ginny was. Did anything that would satisfy her. She really really didn't think ahead, never paused to think of the consequences of her actions. Before she even dared to 'feed' Harry with more Dreamless Potions, she, as a mother and a wife, she should have at least did some research on it. At least check to see whether it could harm Harry or not. But did she? No, of course she didn't. She just simply gave Harry more potions than she knew she could. God, she didn't even realize that the very small and last chance she had had of Harry to still stay with her was destroyed by her own doings. However, I think I could tell why you said she'll be very pitiful in the next chapter. For a mother to lose her husband and especially her kids WOULD certainly hurt, regardless what kind of a person she was. But honestly, true, I could pity that. It's too bad that she didn't realize that she was asking for it. I'm glad that Harry finally decided to do something about these all things, though. The longer he delays em, the harder it'll get. Oh, and Ron was a pleasant surprised. He's matured now, as expected. Sure, he loved his sister so very much, but he loved Harry too. His best friend. If anything, what Draco revealed to him about the whole Ginny poisoning Harry thing had probably opened his eyes to see things he had never really seen before. And he, unlike Hermione, could probably see how much Draco cared for Harry, and how much Harry needed Draco by his side. I think it should be easier for him to understand, with him being a guy and all. I don't know, but the point is I'm just glad Ron's being wise and thoughtful. We need no more than one Hermione. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one. :)
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From ANON - Amiyom on October 16, 2007
Amazing chapter-- an abrupt change in plot! I don't really see how the epilogue can remain exactly the same at this point-- but, okay!

I'm glad to see a fast update, but this chapter had a lot of typos. Might want to watch out for that.

Can't wait for more!
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From tiapotter18 on October 16, 2007
i havent been online the last couple of days, so when i just read the harry-fainting cliffhanger u gave, at first i went "oh no she didnt...again!" but then imagine my relief when i got to read the next chapter. whoo!

i have a question, though. i think u said there will be a way to get around the vows without divorce and other reasons, but harrys planning on a separation. isnt that getting closer to divorce?

cant wait for your update:)
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From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2007
Well now I understand what you meant when you replied to my review in chapter 27. I can't believe Ginny did that. But then I also can. But I would NEVER do it myself. That is cruel. Didn't she think for one minute that doing that might have reprecusions that could take Harry away from her. Well it's happened. Stupid, STUPID GIRL!!! Ugh. Anyways love the chapter. I wonder how you're going to get Harry to be able to be with Draco totally. Will be interesting. Also I like Ron right now. I hope he doesn't do anything stupid to make me hate him in future chapters. Well hope you update soon. Ja ne ^____^
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From ANON - darquiel on October 16, 2007
Okay, we finnish the"poor Ginny"-thoughts!!! That was really bad. The thing with dreamless sleep potion was one thing, but not confessing and staying away from Harry when he was down and sick because of her... now that is another thing.
That will mean some sirious trouble for Harry and Draco. I think that most if not all of the Weasleys (including our dear Hermione) will not see the children in danger and want them to stay with Ginny. And the kids? Will James want to stay with his mother... he is older than the other two... Al loves his daddy too much, and let be realistic: Lily is too young....
YES!!!! More play-dating for the sweeties!!!
Great work. I enjoyed it very much.
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From Mephistedes on October 15, 2007
Oh...my...Gawd. I'm inclined to believe that everyone gets a second chance, but...mother of Merlin! That chick's gone nuts! I know she wants to secure her marriage and keep it going, but this stubborn denial almost killed her husband (and she didn't even visit him in hospital)! Harry's right: I wouldn't trust her as far as I could throw her, and the kids, whether she'd be inclined to do it or not, are in danger. (Actually, I have no idea why I'm this fired up as I've been planning a married-divorced-man leaves for another dude-story like this for months anyway. Maybe it's all the sugar in my system....) God, I love Draco. He's just...indescribable. ^^ And Hermione got off without apologizing, didn't she (Ron's got my trust...for now)? She's still right up there with Ginny in my book. As many twists and turns as you've put in your stories, I'm still keeping an eye on her. And one on Ginny. And one on the Reparations committee. And another on the Masked Lady. And all of her friends, too. Cripes...I don't have that many eyes.... Great chapter! (First betrayal? Gosh, how many more do you have up that ingenious sleeve of yours? ^^)
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From rafiq on October 15, 2007
No more sympathy for Ginny. She is not only stupid but also selfish. She obviously doesn't care if Harry is happy or not as long as he is hers. Also the name of the last chapter "First Betrayal" implies that there will be more betrayals?
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From thrnbrooke on October 15, 2007
Sooo need chapter 29! I wonder if the coma-like state didn't weaken the marriage vows. After all, she almost killed him. That goes against their vows. Right?
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From ANON - Lena on October 13, 2007
*sighs*
I'm really starting to wish Ginny would just fall of a cliff...
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From ANON - Myra on October 13, 2007
Yay! An update. I'm surprised I don't feel like criticizing Ginny today, maybe cause there wasn't any huge part of her in this chapter. I COULD feel sympathy towards that woman, regardless her being so impossible all the time, and to be honest I do feel a bit sorry for her. But love can't be forced. There's just no point of it. Sometimes things just aren't meant to be, if they continue, it'll only hurt the both of them more. Maybe she'll see that one day, then again maybe not. I sure hope it's won't be the latter.

Moving on, Hermione needs to stop. I don't think she realized that she was controlling Harry's life a bit. She needs to start accepting Harry as an adult, who had the right to choose whatever he wanted in HIS life. This Harry wasn't the teenage Harry she knew when they were in Hogwarts. I personally believe that Hermione had the best interest in heart, and she thought that it was the best for Harry and everyone else, basically. But she was wrong. She only needs to see what's really best for Harry himself. Not the people around him. The conversation between Hermione and Draco proved what I was thinking right. Just as Draco stated, she didn't really try to look beyond the surface of the conversation she'd overheard that other day. She didn't even acknowledge the meaning, not even when Draco clearly told her to her face that all he was asking Harry to do was find his own happiness, and that Harry was the one that will be making all the choices at the end of the day, not Ginny, not even Draco, not everyone else and certainly not Hermione. I'm not sure, honestly, but I'd say she had just brushed the thought off. Maybe she was just too used with Harry being the person he was, the person who was content with making everyone else happy. Maybe she didn't think that Harry would feel tired and all worn out one day. I don't know. But we're going to find out. Hehe.

Oooh, and that was certainly a nice and suitable name for the Guardian Angel. Trust you to get it all perfect, haha. (Btw, the idea wasn't cheesy at all, lol).. I wonder what was wrong with Harry? I hope he's fine.. can't wait to find out the cause of it. Maybe cuz Harry had been taking that damned potions? Don't one get any side affects by taking too much of it? Great chapter, as usual. Thank you for the update! Hehe, I'm not even supposed to go online now, cuz today is my traditional celebration day. Yet clearly I failed to resist my temptation when I saw an update. XD
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From ANON - Sol on October 13, 2007
OH, will Ginny see the results of the sessions?
hmmm, Harry's illness, I wonder...

About Ginny being bitchy, I looking at it subjectively from Draco's pov more than as an objective reader! :D And of course, Harry and Draco are the most important and then the children, so overall I'm not that interested in Ginny's happiness even though it links to Harry's happiness as well..and the children's.
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From ANON - darquiel on October 13, 2007
Ahhh... three chapters to read! *sigh* Again a wonderful work you did. I feel sorry for Ginny but I think she is doing something to Harry... If I speculate a bit I would say that she is giving Harry more of the dreamless sleep potion and that Harry is now sick because of it.
It is a bit sad to see that Harrys friend are only trying to keep their "Status Quo" on Harrys shoulders. Really sad... *sniff* A Question: will there be more Albus and Scorpius playing scenes???

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From Christabell on October 13, 2007
I'd guess it's because he's not making himself happy? It's getting to be too much? Again, another fantastic chapter.

As for only updating one at a time... that's perfectly fine, I'm reading both :)
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From Mephistedes on October 13, 2007
What? A cliffhanger? You tease! Great, now I'll be wondering all weekend whether Eaglethorpe's an evil crossdresser who masquerades as the Masked Lady, or whether Hermione gets figuratively smacked in the face (although I don't mind her being flogged with spells), or what happened to Harry. I enjoyed the tete-a-tete between Draco and Hermione: my eyes kept vibrating in anger and I don't recall ever scowling this hard at my monitor every time she opened her mouth to speak. Color patches and hallucinations, though...I'm inclined to think he's been poisoned. My money's on Granger...bushy-headed control freak. Update soon. ^^
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From ANON - I will raise you an eyebrow on October 13, 2007
Great chapter. I was glad to see Draco and Hermione come face to face. Draco handled her so well. What would Ron think of it all?

I love Tutela; the name, what she does,and stands for, everything.

I am worried about Harry! I hope he gets better. The long awaited session with Eaglethorpe has come and he concluded the same thing as Harry. SO glad it came from Harry's mouth first.

The Masked Lady is mysterious as ever but I would like to think that Marion had the sense to fight to protect her son against mad warmongering ingrates.

This is a great story and I love every chapter. :)
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