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Reviews for I Give You a Wondrous Mirror

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on June 17, 2015
    My god this story was brilliant!
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  • From Severus1snape on June 17, 2015
    OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG it
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2015
    Omg when they were taken and locked in the box together... it was so sweet how harry spoke to draco!
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  • From Severus1snape on June 12, 2015
    I just found this, I told you I am going to read all your stories!

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  • From Annecia89 on August 01, 2014
    This was a really great story :)
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  • From ANON - havoc tellenoi on July 01, 2014
    Oh gods, right in the feels as always. Written well, thoroughly engaging and as it has been forever, timed down to perfection. I was so certain the Masked Lady was Marian and the twist that it was Andromeda was freaking perfect!
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  • From ANON - Angel_Kayohisura on June 13, 2011
    Never stop writing. This is one of your older stories, but, even then, you were a superb writer. ^_____^ The story was wonderfully written and had ...awesome character development. I love the progression of Harry and Draco's relationship the most, though. The thouroughness, time, uncertainty... And even though it /was/ sad for me to read about the alternate world, I'm glad everything wasn't perfect and that the character's choices could be bad for them as well as good. I never would have guessed Andromeda (damnnit! and clever Narcissa, using that spell) to be the Masked Lady, although I must admit I'm still curious as to how she tamed the dragons. :] Overall, fantastic read.
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  • From MaskedLily on September 23, 2009
    Absolutely amazing. That was seriously in depth and complex. I don't think that I've read a story like that one here before. But I loved it so congrats and much love =)
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  • From Whimsy101 on March 17, 2009
    Lomonaaeren,


    First off, please let me say that I'm a huge fan of your works. Your way of weaving a story is complex and compelling, and thoroughly entertaining. I always find myself enthralled with the story, completely at the mercy of your words and the plot you've created. In fact, I've become such a fan that I've recommended your works to friends who enjoy Potter fanfictions (as well as posted links directly to your stories on my potter rpg board that's still underway).

    That aside, when I read the summary of I Give You a Wonderous Mirror, I was a bit set back about it. I wasn't certain that I'd enjoy it as much as say, What Shakes The Elephant, Building With Wornout Tools and your other works. I'd hesitated on it, to be honest.

    I'm glad that on this night, when my insomnia hit me as it usually does when I'm stressed and turn my days into nights, and nights into days, I decided to gamble.

    I *loved* this story. It's got such a unique plot, completely and utterly fascinating, and the idea of the marriage vows vs. the life debts was just brilliant. I feel so sad when I think of the Harry and Draco living separate lives without that connection between them - to me it seems as if they're simply denying themselves air the breathe just to make others happy, which is a terrible, terrible thing when you think about it.

    The ancient ancestors were amazing, I loved the concept and it was enthralling (the battle) and Andromeda! She blew my mind! I couldn't believe it. It simply floored me. I pitied her so badly and that's one thing that makes a good, fantastic story. The best villain's are usually ones you can commiserate with, and always have that spark of humanity that makes them comparable to yourself. The best villains are flawed, just like the best heroes are human and flawed.

    Also, another thing that simply held my attention (probably longer than it should have) was the fact that Ron was by far more accepting of the relationship and love between Harry and Draco, than Hermione was (...is...whichever world they were in). I felt so horrible, absolutely horrible when Harry euthanized George. Such a heavy weight that had to have been.

    I'm exceedingly glad that I took the gamble on this story, as I was (yet again) trapped in the web you weave so seamlessly it seems, and gripped tightly in the strands of the story. Fabulous work, dear.
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  • From Issy on January 05, 2009
    Great!

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2008
    Awesome story it took me all day to read. I love you as an author, and I hope you write more, and never stop.
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  • From Diane on July 23, 2008
    Ooooo that was excellent. I can't believe I didn't see most of that coming! You actually surprised me with the Masked Lady and with how they were going to fix things and I didn't see Draco raising the dead and now I'm just gushing. I wanted to hit Ginny so bad through that. Hermione too. Ginny I could understand acting stupid with her relationship with Harry because she didn't want to bring things up blah blah, but I would like to think Hermione is smart enough to either see that Harry's not happy or see that Harry needs some better direction and focus, especially in relationships. And that last battle thing with Andromeda was just... wicked. I love Harry still fighting no matter how much she tortured him because he couldn't let anything happen to the kids. And Draco holding himself together in the closet while still being able to fake breaking. That was just as excellent.

    The dreams were a great temporary solution to their problems It was brilliant. But what I really liked was how you didn't have their first "real" time perfect. You pointed out the imperfections that make it real and not porn. Tripping on robes, clicking teeth together, all the little things that make it more realistic. It was just fantastic.

    And I love how their relationship isn't perfect. They lose so much when they just get along and everything's happy. Those two are way too stubborn for that sort of thing and I love how you keep to their characters. I love how you do that in all your stories. You're just the best.
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  • From daynajones on February 19, 2008
    thanks so much for this great fic! It is so different and fits perfectly with that cursed epilogue. It has been a long time since I have read one that I have enjoyed as much as this one. Loved it all, the crypt solution was absolutely out of this world brilliant. The children were a great touch of reality, but didn't take over the story as I have seen happen so often with the epilogue compliant fics out there. Your Harry and Draco were just so human, loved the final "luv" scene with the comments about the differences between real life and the dream sex. All in all I would place this in one of my top 10 favorites.
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  • From ANON - Nigelous on February 15, 2008
    Lomonaaeren,

    God you know how to spin a good yarn! I began reading this late last night, and before I knew it, it was almost 2:00am...my eyes felt like peeled onions but I didn't want to stop reading. You have done a masterful job of creating a canon-compliant extension of JKR's universe peopled by appealing and believable characters trapped in a plausible situation with tight, crisp dialog and an incredibly ominous and sinister atmosphere...I can't wait to see where you are taking this.

    Cheers!
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  • From sunset20 on December 16, 2007

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