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Reviews for Kingdom of demons

By : FrogDemons
  • From laceyp on April 09, 2013
    plz update it sounds really interesting
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  • From Amar_Mystickz on October 08, 2012
    this sounds like it'll be pretty cool.
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  • From Sheireen on January 31, 2009
    It's such a shame that you haven't continued the story.
    The first chapter was so great and I'm curious how the real first chapter would have been.
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  • From Demonicone on December 05, 2007
    This sounds very interesting, I can't wait to read it. ^_^
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  • From toads70 on October 10, 2007
    i'd have to read the first chapter to know if the story is going to be any good, please post it soon
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  • From rachna on August 20, 2007
    hello...just wondering when you were going to update next...I REALLYYY can't wait till the story actually begins...and please have long chapters? thank you! :)
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  • From rachna on August 15, 2007
    hey, I think what you have going here is really good. I like these kinds of fics, so perhaps I'm being partial to it, but I really like it. I definitely think that you should continue this. I love Harry/Draco fics that have a Dom and a sub. Keep writing. :)

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  • From Silkylove on August 07, 2007
    opinion...i've read from another story some of the things simular to that, but whats new there right? You on the other hand of gone into greater detail about all and so far shows great potental for an amazing story. Can't wait to see the first chapter. It'll be interesting to see how this story will work out :)
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  • From TheBoo962 on August 04, 2007
    I'm really really looking forward to this fic! I love sub harry ones and draco is just plain sexy all bossy lol. I love your take on it with the deamons! I'ts really original and very well written! I really hope u write more soon!
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  • From hpobsessed on July 30, 2007
    It is a very interesting idea! I would love to read it! Only I'm not so fond of the disciplining
    Harry in public thing. Other than that it sounds pretty good!
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  • From disgruntledfairy on July 28, 2007
    I LOVE this beginning to the story. It's very informative and it sounds like it has a lot of potential. Hooray for M-PREG!! Hope you add some of that in your story. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Until then! :)
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  • From dm999 on July 28, 2007
    Very interesting story and also but a lot of background. Please continue.

    I hope that Blaise and Draco don't go submissive to each other, I just like Dom!Draco and Dom!Blaise ^_^

    Update soon please!!!
    BYe
    DM
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  • From strangefic on July 27, 2007
    Interesting informational. I'd like to see how you start. I wouldn't mind being your beta, but I do have to warn you i tend to not pull punches and tell people what i think. It's why I don't review often. But if you think you would like that kind of critique I would love to help out. It seems you have a good idea of where to go. If you'd like to talk more about this let me know.


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  • From Bastian on July 27, 2007
    This seems rather interesting. I'll be watching for the official first chapter. Hope you update with it soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2007
    It sounds like a good start, but there's not much to review. It looks like I think you wanted it to look, meaning a chapter of a schoolbook or an encyclopedia. There's no plot to comment on. Style of writing is acceptable (not bad but also not a masterpiece). There's always room for improvement, but if this is your first story then it's really good.
    As to demons, then usually succubus is a female and incubus is male, but if you want to have a bottom Harry, then maybe it's better the way you describe it.
    It's a promising start and I hope the real story will be just as good.
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