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Reviews for Divorce, disaster and denial

By : clairevictoria
  • From lizkrohn on July 08, 2019

    Nice story. Well plotted. Thanks


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  • From lizkrohn on July 08, 2019

     Pg 1: Are they actually Harry's children? She was promiscuous at school (canon), so why not after the marriage too?


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  • From ANON - cztelnik on June 28, 2015
    Where to begin.
    You are a tremendously clever author and can be a brilliant mom should you have kids of your own. The ability to pick ideas and develop them into full fledged cohesive plot is rarer then you might expect. There's a great mix of dark to offset the happiness but it isn't chaotic and with the exception of Andi very logical. (I have a hard time believing a romantic acceptance of sex when her initial horror was reinforced so strongly and recently). What made this so very extra special was using Tolkien's elvish, that tops it all; even the really hot sex scenes...which you are really good at writing too by the way.

    Just wanted to say as a lover of fairy tales, thanks for sharing your muse and all the best wishes from a grateful reader.

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  • From ANON - Kochanski on July 06, 2014
    Thanks for the bloody Mary-sue warning - not! I'm sure you 'forgot' to add that warning because you knew no one would waste their time reading it ... There's 4.5 hours of my life I'll never get back, and I'll certainly never read another one of 'Avenging Angel's stories again!
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  • From LadyGrelka on March 24, 2010
    I would like to beat Ginny within an inch of her life and then start over again. At first I thought that it was his money that she got (and I would still be mad at her) but to take his children is unforgivable. *Snuggles Harry*
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  • From koki on February 04, 2010
    you should also put N/C in th warnings
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  • From koki on February 04, 2010
    told you, another rape!!
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  • From koki on February 04, 2010
    is anyone else gonna get raped?
    bloody hell its like all this story is about
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  • From koki on February 04, 2010
    oh my god please kill ginny off, thats sick!!!!!!!!
    her own kid!!!
    i know it is only a fic but did my heart pound or what!
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  • From chrisault on October 24, 2009
    Very good story. I really enjoyed it especially as I love mpreg :)
    Cheers xxx
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  • From stargirl77 on September 13, 2009
    I am just starting to read your story and have gotten to the first chapter. I have a problem in that you say that Harry walks out of the lawyer's office and into "her" arms but you never quite say who "she" is and then this Andie person comes in and I get totally confused. I'm going to keep reading and hope to figure it out but can you send me an email or something and help me out? Thanks. laney12186@yahoo.com
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on January 31, 2009
    HAD TO READ AGAIN, YAP, STILL LOVE IT!
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  • From ladyedgecombe on November 06, 2008
    I know you wrote this last year, but I just had to say how much I enjoyed it. I am new to this site and found the story because I am reading Salvation right now. Really love that story too. Please, please keep writing, it's great.
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  • From Chakahlah on October 16, 2008
    that was the most amazing story I've had the privallege of reading for a while. Thank you
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  • From NormanCharles on January 05, 2008
    Let me tell you what I like most about your story. It's a well built house - nice foundation, very nice framing. I love the detail. The characters are believable within the universe you've created. What I like most is that your story is driven by dialogue. You have wonderful turns of phrase, foreshadowing and the ability to build tension where it'll do the most good.
    Bravisima, molto bella!
    N!
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