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Reviews for Custody Battle

By : CryingCinderella
  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on July 31, 2007
    slaps blake for marring hermione and having four brats with her. she needs to get rid of blake and go back to severus
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  • From ANON - Sampdoria on July 30, 2007
    Very interesting start. I assume the third chapter is a vission of the past? I look forward to read more of your story!
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  • From angelnomiko on July 30, 2007
    awww that was sweet of mione ... please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 30, 2007
    I like it. Please udate soon.

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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on July 29, 2007
    not bad so far
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  • From Patriot1 on July 29, 2007
    i thought it was great and i can't wait to find out how severus reacts to the news of who his daughter's mother is.
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  • From angelnomiko on July 29, 2007
    ohh man mione you have a lot to tell ... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - perfectly flawed on July 29, 2007
    this story seems like its going to be really good. there's never been one on this topic before. although you should know that where you have minerva saying 'march 11 1998', it should be 'the 11th of march 1998' thats how the english/scottish would say it. don't mean to offend you but its a pet peeve when americanisms are used in harry potter speech. thanks
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  • From skydancer on July 29, 2007
    well, this is going to be a bumpy ride!!! ( in my best looisianah accent!! lol!!
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  • From SorceressFujin on July 29, 2007
    Great story so far, looking forward to more! :D
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  • From Emmylovedraco on July 29, 2007
    Great Story Please update soon,
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  • From ccino49 on July 29, 2007
    Ooo. To be a fly on the wall when that coversation took place. Hee Hee. Typical Snape, blaming others rather than himself and denying all knowledge of her. I tak it Hermione will be called in soon, the anticipation of that confontation has me on the edge of my seat. LOL.
    ccino
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 29, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ccino49 on July 29, 2007
    Oh, now this sounds interesting. I hope you're quick at updates because I want to know what happens next. I take it the tinkling glass came from Snape's direction when he heard her name called. He He. I'm eager to find out his reaction to finding out he has a daughter. Does the girl know who her farther is?
    ccino
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