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Reviews for Their Greatest Mistake

By : suzanbones
  • From CafeAuLait on May 12, 2011
    I love the little twist, as well as the wonderful set down Hermione gave Narcissa.
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  • From aidwioktari on July 30, 2009
    what a really sweet story . . . indeed
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  • From blondpierogi on July 20, 2009
    wow i love this story!!! You did a wonderful job with it and I will read it over and over.. KUDOS!!!
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  • From kazfeist on July 19, 2009
    A sweet and satisfying ending. Hope RL loosens up and you'll give us more stories in the future. :D
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  • From caseyjarryn on April 26, 2009
    wow, great story!! Poor Hermione!
    hope to see an update soon!!

    Casey
    xoxo
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  • From dragongirl on April 23, 2009
    Spectacular Please more
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  • From Tanya on April 21, 2009
    I love this story and can't wait to read more... I think that Hermione and Draco are in love but just haven't realised it yet
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  • From dragongirl on April 20, 2009
    Ok this one goes into my watching list too.... Keep them coming...
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  • From Robs on April 19, 2009
    Another awesome chapter. I hope to see another update soon!
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  • From Citten on April 19, 2009
    YEAH! A NEW CHAPTER!!! and a great chapter! :) well they will continue to become closer and are wonderful together. well that was sad for hermione to lose her parents but wonderful that she was able to see and talk to them sainely one last time. i am so glad that you have not forgotten about us and i am sooooo happy that you updated, but dont keep us waiting too long for the next chapter now! :)
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  • From ItalianBeauty on December 25, 2008
    Great idea- I love Hermione and Draco married- and some fine writing. But I would like to point out even seventeen year old boys can't cum ( I think you had Draco cumming six to eight time the first night together ) that many times in one night. Frankly you're pushing it at four and add on to that he is drunk! I'm sorry that's just entirely too unrealistic. The line between fantasy and unbelieveable is fine. The other complaint I have is the supposed size of Draco's equitment. A foot long? Again you're pushing the line. Other than that a great story that i've had a lot of fun reading.
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  • From chickaboo on December 16, 2008
    Fantastic update! Poor Hermione! I'm glad she has Draco to care for her though. And hey, he even knew enough to go find her friends. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on December 16, 2008
    I can't wait to see the boys reaction to him in their common room. I really enjoy reading this story.
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  • From Citten on December 15, 2008
    great!! i really like the door thing--that was cool! :) magonagal is totally awsome to give advise to draco! poor hermione i love that draco would go and get the others and i really love that he just held her to try and comforted her. i also love that he totally defended her at breakfast and that she herd some of it. :) i very much look forward to more and i do hope that it is soon it will help keep me sane during finals! :)
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  • From reva on October 01, 2008
    Love your story...are you still in the need for a beta?

    If so..

    So, here's the test:
    If you're interested in beta-ing for me, please review with the following criteria:
    Name: belle_morte (here), belladonna (on GE), and lusciouslucas on lj
    How Long You've Been Beta-ing For: Honestly I have never been a beta before. However, I am a long time fan of the fandom and I have read hundreds upon hundreds of stories. Not to mention I am a university student, so correcting grammar, spelling, and just general nit picking come naturally to me.
    Availability: (are you working with a ton of people? are you overwhelmed? did you take a break from beta-ing and are looking on getting back into the game?) I am completely available and I check my email at least 3 times a day, not including all the time I spend reading fanfic. :p

    Test:
    1. House Elf
    b) it is house elf


    2. A ____ of shoes
    a) pair
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