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Reviews for Their Greatest Mistake

By : suzanbones
  • From JaceDamian23 on September 29, 2008
    Hermione collapsed on the bed, staring up at the gauzy, cr
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 28, 2008



    The seven of them had moved into Hermione
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 28, 2008

    and got rid of those who they absolutely refused to invite, which was really only one person, Albus Dumbledore, who had gotten them into the mess in the first place.

    aww thats not nice....its your fault you two were drunk..not his. lol







    The only ones not affected were Ginny, Blaise, and Dumbledore, who had shown up despite not receiving an invitation (purposefully, of course). Ginny and Dumbledore beamed at them, while Blaise smiled haughtily, his own version of beaming.

    lmfao im glad i was mad that they didn't invite him. haha
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    Except, there it was, a smile from Mr. Weasley. A smile that said,
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 28, 2008
    very very hot scene though It kind of annoyed me that those maids bothered them.....they knew they just had sex lol.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 28, 2008

    Blaise had been gifted with his mother
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 28, 2008

    Madam Malfoy beamed at her, and then almost bounced with glee as she said,
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 28, 2008
    t also made her drunk enough to think that giving him one strip show, two lap dances, three blow jobs, and four hand jobs were good ideas

    what? 3 blow jobs and four hand jobs AND sex? wow. lmfao. thats alot.......


    He was very naked, and had already received two hand jobs and two blow jobs from her talented body before the lap dance.

    once again i just find that silly. unless he didn't cum all four times. lmfao. sorry I just had to say something.
    The only way I can see that happening if she is doing both at the same time.





    She pouted, causing his erection to throb painfully against her.
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  • From Citten on September 07, 2008
    so do we get to see the 'christening'? :) i love the way they act together! it is just so cute and protective. i loved the paper part with them and how hermione thaught it was funny. :) i do hope that you have another chapter coming and soon!!!! i cant wait to see the schools reaction to them in the coming days and months. :) post soon!!!!
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  • From faerieflightz on September 02, 2008
    I greatly enjoy the story, please keep updating!
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  • From revampedfallenangel on August 13, 2008
    I really like your story so far...When will you be posting the next chapter?
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  • From faerieflightz on August 03, 2008
    I don't normally review but I wanted to let you know how much I've been enjoying your story. If possible I would like for you to e-mail me when you update. sttiricks@aol.com. Great story! Hope to see more updates in the near future.
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  • From WriterChick1990 on August 02, 2008
    well worth the wait desperate for more though
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  • From Citten on August 02, 2008
    yes it was very good! :) i could have had more though of what else happened at the ball. i also would love to know what there fight was about! mostly just courious. well maybe it is part of something that happens latter and we arent suppost to know yet, right? :) well i am glad that you have you updated! please do so soon!
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  • From chickaboo on August 02, 2008
    Yay an update! Sigh so the party is finally done and over with. Now they just have to deal with going back to school. lol I can't wait for more. Hope you update again soon!
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