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Reviews for The Change

By : SFPANTHER
  • From kattniptwo on April 08, 2012
    I have to review! ch 8.. Dont get me wrong i am enjoying the story. however as one viewr put it the bondage sex was a bit out of place..at least for me that is not a great first time for sex. she was a virgin so being used that way could have been quite dangerous..i also question how it went considering how she is just coming off from being abused..I know she consented but still was a bit much... just had to put that out there!
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  • From Lanathewitch on February 24, 2012
    Hello !

    I've read your story regularly. I'm french and would like to know if i could translate your story for french readers. It's an interesting story and I'm sure it would please french fans and ficreaders.
    Let me know if it's ok.

    Thanks.

    P.S. : Excuse me if there is any grammatical errors, it's been a while since I've written in English...
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  • From purefaith91 on December 27, 2010
    Boo and Yay! Boo to the twins. They are usually more reasonable. Ron probably fabricated some fairy tale to get them to help...or they just think that she is needed to win. Yay to Charlie, Tonks and Remus. It would be very difficult to think that you are working for the light side when the actions taken do not portray much light. I think it is time for Ron to become a prisoner of war and become acquainted with the sound proof room and maybe LV, LM, SS, etc. brand so he will know whose bitch he is. Excellent! p
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  • From purefaith91 on December 27, 2010
    The only thing that is a shame is that SS and HG "played" the first time that they were together intimately AND that it was her first time. It would have been nicer for her to have had a gentler experience. Of course, I am a sissy and would not be able to withstand that kind of treatment so may not understand what she was going for, although it did not seem as though she liked that part either. Great story so far. p
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  • From purefaith91 on December 27, 2010
    Well Hermione has a gag and Ron made me gag so I guess we are even (ha!). Blech, I really can't stand him. I was very proud of Harry though. It is a wonder he has not gone to see her to apologize to her yet. They need to send Ron away this time and not wait for a next time. Love your LV, NM and LM. Also DM is good in this story. Great. p
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  • From purefaith91 on December 27, 2010
    I don't know who else is happy, but the only thing that could make it better is if the twins now beat the crap out of that thug. Really stupid for him to tell them that Snape knew where she was, but then again, he is not a brain trust, is he? And if they don't do anything to hold them all (especially Ron) liable for their actions, then I am rooting for Hermione to go with LV. p
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  • From purefaith91 on December 27, 2010
    I swear, as wishy washy as Harry is, it is a wonder he can ever decide what side to take. I love Hermione with Snape (first choice, then Lucius and then Draco...never Ron). Shows lots of promise so far and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. p
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on September 09, 2008
    I just finished it the story! well I have to say that was a well written story a bit weird at times but still it was a cool weird! and it was funny in parts so its all was good! Well Done!

    excellent story! :-)


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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on September 09, 2008
    I just read the author's notes now I wrote that note before without reading it I havent finished the story so i didnt know am soooooo sorry for your loss! :-(
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on September 09, 2008
    am so so sorry to hear about your father having cancer I hope he gets better soon and yes that was wrong of them to ask about this story or any story you might post instead of asking about your family etc! and yes your family and your health goes come first before this story or any story you might post which by the way its great story a bit sad etc but great and funny etc! keep up the great work! xx

    ALANRICKMANFAN21 (when I made this account I was 21 years old (I am now 24 years old))

    PS you said you where sick too correct? if you dont mind me asking whats wrong? oh god you dont have cancer too do you oh god am sorry hope you get better soon!

    Very Best Wishes


    PPS I know what its like to have a family memeber who has cancer my first cousin Alan Feely from my irish side my mum's side(who sadly died when I was 10 years old (I am now 24 years old) he died at the age of 21 years old!) had cancer! its was sooo hard on our whole Irish family but he will never be forgotten never! I know its not the same as your dad etc having it but still I know what its like! xx
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 04, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 28, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From mlui on May 23, 2008
    Besides everyone being completely out of character, especially Hermione, I think the story is very enjoyable. It's very light. The only person remotely in character is Severus...I can understand Hermione wanting to be neutral but everyone else who'd gone over, I didn't quite understand their reasoning. Especially Charlie Weasley. The Order just seems to not really function without the support of Hermione. They've essentially taken her for granted. But I'm really sure they could function without Hermione because they did before the fall of Voldemort (Harry at one year old) and she wasn't even born yet. I guess, they needed an effective leader with Dumbledore gone. Voldemort and his Death Eaters seem too nice and tame but otherwise, they were hilarious at times.

    One thing to keep in mind grammatically, is the difference between "your" and "you're." I noticed that you repeated several times this mistake. You wrote "your" when the sentence required "you're" instead. "Your" is possessive and similar to "my," "our," "his" and "her." You should insert any of these to test if you are using the correct form. "You're" stands for "you are" and if the sentence makes sense with "you are" then you're using the correct one. If you need a beta for future stories, you can feel free to email me.

    Anyways, the story was enchanting (almost like the ceiling of the Great Hall!) and very enjoyable read!!
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  • From slygriff21 on May 20, 2008
    Another awsome story sis. I loved how you ended it. It rocks! I can't wait to read another HP story. I'd read your Bleach stuff, but you know I don't follow it. Which is only fair since you don't read my Star Wars stuff. lol. Great work sis!

    love ya!
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  • From Citten on May 19, 2008
    thanks for the ending it was good and wrapped everything up but i could have had more (but i could always have more!) :) i will be looking forward to the next story when it comes! hope all is well with you, and may it continue to be. :)
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