Click Here!

Reviews for The Change

By : SFPANTHER
  • From Utopia on May 19, 2008
    I have really enjoyed this, and I could see the plot past the whoopsies; and they didn't bother me. (Which is saying something, as I am a beta!).

    May I give you my tips for capturing your muse?
    1) a nice hot bubble bath with lots of bubbles.
    2) a rather large slice of triple chocolate gateau.
    3) lots of candles.
    4) soft music.
    5) a glass of wine (though, mine is non-alcoholic)
    6) the phone off the hook.

    Mix the above 6 together and I find that my muse comes flooding into my brain with plots! Plus, you deserve to kick back and relax! You've been through a lot and deserve the calm. You've stayed strong and are a credit to yourself.

    Kind Regards and best wishes.
    Utopia.
    Report Review

  • From Utopia on May 19, 2008
    12

    I too have watched as life support was turned off, and I understand how utterly heartbreaking it is.
    I wish you well, and I hope that you stay strong. I know it hurts, but remember the good memories where you can.

    Best Wishes.
    Helen.
    Report Review

  • From Utopia on May 19, 2008
    I haven't reviewed any other chapters as I am in the middle of work and having a break. Hoewever, your A/N in chapter 6 saddened me. I wish you all the best for your family and yourself; and I think you were right to be angry with someone pestering you over the fic.

    I write for my own pleasure, and I only share my stories so others can also find pleasure in them. When writing becomes a chore rather than something I enjoy, I stop and let the plot go. Write for your own pleasure, everyone else be damned!

    Again, I wish you all the best, stay strong and keep smiling.
    Report Review

  • From sirsevchick on May 18, 2008
    I think this is one of the best fics out there. I cannot believe that you had the wherewithal to get this whole thing completed with all of the changes in your life. I hope that things have calmed down for you and that 2008 is not as stressful as the past months have been. Good luck to you.
    Report Review

  • From CarlaRush on May 17, 2008
    It was a pleasure to read this story. I can only hope a plot bunny will chase your heels again so we can read more of your work.
    Report Review

  • From Angie30 on May 17, 2008
    Love the ending, I like how it all turned out for the better.
    Report Review

  • From RoseEvans on May 17, 2008
    Oh, I loved it so much. Cookies to each and every page.
    Report Review

  • From MsTree on May 17, 2008
    I enjoyed this story very much when I read it today, but was unaware that it had not been beta'd until reading your notes at the beginning of each chapter.

    I am not an accredited beta, but I do know my grammar and am adept in spelling. If you want me to go over the story and make corrections so you can possibly post to other archives, I am more than willing.

    Please e-mail me and let me know one way or the other.
    Report Review

  • From Pyroangel198605 on May 17, 2008
    Very very good. Yay to happy endings
    Report Review

  • From Heidi191976 on May 17, 2008
    That was a great story. I am glad that Harry ended up with Pansy and fathered several children. I loved how Hermione told Severus that she was expecting again. I enjoyed reading this story.
    Report Review

  • From amsev on March 15, 2008
    This is such an interesting story! And don't force yourself to write longer chapters if your muse isn't cooperating. I loved your author's notes where you and the characters dialogue.

    I do wish the guys would wear their ladies' brands, too. Seems kinda rough that the women had to go through that and almost become like property without claiming some property of their own! But that's just me. Like equal opportunity stuff!
    Report Review

  • From catysmom1028 on March 14, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

    Report Review

  • From DB1 on March 14, 2008
    @19 awesome, update soon

    *DB*
    Report Review

  • From slygriff21 on March 14, 2008
    WOW! Sounds like Harry gets one hell of a good deal! LOL! I loved this chapter! I can't wait to read more sis. This story rocks!

    Love your lil sis,
    Tiff
    Report Review

  • From blondpierogi on March 14, 2008
    Hello!
    Even though this chapter was post a long while ago, i just read it.
    I am soo sorry about the passing of your father. Even though he is no longer here, he will always be with you and looking over you. He is no longer suffering and he is in a better place. Once again I am deeply sorry. Hold on to the positive and happy memories of him, and when you need them, think about the them and you will feel better. Much love to you.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!