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Reviews for The Change

By : SFPANTHER
  • From CarlaRush on September 05, 2007
    Wow, when Hermione gets mad, she really gets mad! Great chapter. Try joining WIKTT they have lots of betas.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on September 05, 2007
    Wow! Holy Cricket. Awsome story so for. I love your writing. Please add more.
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  • From lilbitbord on September 05, 2007
    OOh Ron you got what was coming to you! I can't wait for more.
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  • From Solaris on September 05, 2007
    This sentence needs a spelling correction, sis: "They would appreciate the jester. Now you know that you are loved by many people." It's gesture, not jesture.

    But man, I love this story. Thank you for posting it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 05, 2007
    Absolutely brilliant. I am glad Ron got what he deserved, he shouldn't have bothered Hermione. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
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  • From scotsgirl on September 05, 2007
    i like this story very much but I need to know why are they all turning to the dark side what is the reason, is there something you have yet to tell us. Looking forward to the next update
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  • From slygriff21 on September 04, 2007
    WOW! I missed a lot in the past week, what with moving into our new house! I love it so far! I loved ther twists about Ginny, Draco, Tonks, and Remus. I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon sis!

    love ya,
    sis
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  • From lilbitbord on September 04, 2007
    Sorry I haven't reviewd in a while, I just haven't had the time to sit and read, stupid RL keeps getting in the way :) I do love this story and I glad to see that Charlie it trying to help Severus find Hermione. Ron is an idoit and I don't think he is going to survive this story. I hope they find Hermione before Ron destroys her.
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  • From DB1 on September 04, 2007
    @10 please kill ron he would deserve it!!! awesome chapter update soon

    *DB*
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on September 04, 2007
    THAT RON!! OMG!! what happens next? update soon!
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  • From DollyDelle on September 03, 2007
    update please!!!! i want to know what happens!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 03, 2007
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more. I am looking forward to finding out where Ron is keeping Hermione and to see her safely returned to Severus. Please continue this wonderful story.
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  • From CarlaRush on September 03, 2007
    Wonderful chapter! I love it when Severus is so protective.
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  • From Sampdoria on September 03, 2007
    Thank you for the update! I hope that you in the next chapter not only will return Hermione safely, but let us enjoy a heavy punishment of Ron!!!
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  • From VivaLaKitty on September 03, 2007
    Argh! Yes! Tonkstonkstonks! I'm a little bit miffed over the cannon Tonks/Remus theme, but I'll get over it. I'm glad Bellatrix is having more of an appearance in the story... She's one of my favourite characters (Hence the penname) and I believe Bellatrix should be allowed into the final battle because, to put it bluntly, she's an absolute psychopath- No one can stop her.

    I'm annoyed with the Weasley clan, but fantastically happy that Charlie is a death eater. (Yay Charlie!) It's an interesting plot twist, and I'm glad everyone is slowly transferring over to the dark side.

    I really can't give you any storyline suggestions at this point because you've made it clear with this chapter that you're well in control of your story right now.

    One last thing- 'apperate' is actually spelled 'apparate'

    Looking forward to your next update,
    Bella
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