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Reviews for Broken & Abused

By : MacBeth
  • From sbrande on February 21, 2010
    Love the story. Was just wondering if you would be continuing it?

    love Sonia :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 30, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 09, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't believe that Lucius was that cruel to Hermione. Just what was the thought that he saw before he attacked her? I am glad that Severus got back in time to stop Lucius from doing more damage. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 07, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 06, 2008
    Excellent. I hope that you will eventually write more to this. I would like to see what happens between Severus and Hermione and also how her visit to the Burrow goes. Please update soon.
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  • From GryffindorBloodTraitor on March 11, 2008
    Love it! Please update soon!
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  • From magicalheather999 on December 27, 2007
    I want to read more
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From DarqueHart on December 20, 2007
    Ch. 9 again - Yes! The revised ending is 'gentler'. I don't write, only read ... but with reading, I've noticed how the authors create a story structure that arches through the tale by building up and then finishing out with a conclusion. Each chapter within the story is it's own small tale that follows the same arching pattern. [Except for the evil cliffie!] I have great admiration for those who can put properly spelled and used words into good sentence structure and string it all together into an entertaining story for the reader to enjoy. ;-)
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  • From Delfin on December 20, 2007
    i hadnt had the chance to review this story and I've gotta say it's good, different but good nevertheless :)

    update sooon
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 20, 2007
    Another great chapter. I think Severus is going to be the only male to get close enough to help her. I don't think she wants Harry or Ron near her at all. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 20, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From DarqueHart on December 19, 2007
    Ch. 9 - Hopefully helpful criticism... you need to learn to round your chapters out. They don't seem to 'end', but rather just stop. Almost like there was more to come that didn't! Whereas a true 'cliffhanger' builds up to a pinnacle and leaves you hanging in anticipation. The scenes should taper off, like the dimming of the lights at the end of a stage play. You just need to write a few more lines to close the scene out.
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 18, 2007
    This was a great chapter. I can't believe that Ron was a complete idiot towards Hermione. He shouldn't be pressuring her to do anything. I think Professor Snape is developing feelings for Hermione and maybe she is beginning to like him more. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From Citten on December 17, 2007
    ...what!? you just stopped it there! that cant be legal. so you do have more right? and soon, right? well i hope so. ;)
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