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Reviews for What Shakes The Elephant

By : Angelsfear
  • From RavenQueen on September 13, 2007
    Oh this was a wonderful chapter! More Phoenix lore, their fight, their making up...all good things! I loved the declarations of feelings...Harry admitting his want, Draco admitting his love. Just extremely well done...good job, you! The kiss at the end??? FINALLY! Finally, Harry is taking control of what he wants. I'm sure there's still angst aplently to come, but I'm thoroughly hoping the boys don't back away from what they've accomplished here. As always, I can't wait for more!
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  • From murderaidx on September 13, 2007
    that chapter was just amazing. had me kinda teary eyed, and draco telling harry he loves him. awwwww
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  • From Lacegag on September 13, 2007
    The last few xhapters were wonderful. I loved how you tied the phoenix lore together in this. I can't wait for more!

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  • From misslala on September 13, 2007
    Okay, I'm such a dork, cause I'm kinda crying, but Im happy. :) Good chapter! I think that they deserved that. I like how Draco came to terms with his feelings and I'm assuming that Harry accepts his admission if he kissed him. :) *warm heart* This makes me feel so good to read. :) I don't know why. hehe thank you!!! And them being naked was just great, so who cares, hehehe. More soon, please?
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  • From rachxoxo on September 13, 2007
    The perfect thing to come home to at the end of a shitty work day. And now I'll have to wait until tomorrow probably to read the next chapter(s). Great. Thanks alot. ;) Kidding, of course.
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  • From RRW on September 12, 2007
    Oh my goodness, Rolf. I almost fell out my chair when I read that description. Excellent.
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  • From alleycat88 on September 12, 2007
    I truly love this story. It is beautifully written and I can actually picture their faces and emotions! Plesae don't stop!!
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on September 12, 2007
    With each chapter, I get more and more excited with what I know is to come. I cannot get enough of this story. Draco is such a doll. As always, I thank you for your fast updates and wish you the best of luck with all future chapters you intend to write.

    I hope to read more soon,

    ~ rAiNwAtEr ~
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  • From rachxoxo on September 12, 2007
    I was worried about you! I'm glad everything is back to normal (whatever the hell that word means)

    Your question as to breaking up the story or not, honestly it doesn't matter to me, I'll read it either way. :)

    For the record, I don't think you're insane. You're a writer and writer's brains follow different schemes than those of other creative people.

    I don't think I need to tell you anymore that I loved it, but I will anyways. I loved it!

    My sister is one of those nay sayers. She refuses to give the books or the moives a chance because it is 'little kid bullshit' and wishes death on poor little innocent Daniel Radcliffe. Pfft. Her loss, right?

    -Rach
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  • From bananasforyou on September 12, 2007
    nice ending on that one!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 12, 2007
    Sooo need ch 41!
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  • From RavenQueen on September 12, 2007
    What a fabulous couple of chapters! I love how you incorporated TTotBB into your fic, and the history of those phoenixes is wonderful. So glad to have you back and updating again!
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  • From misslala on September 11, 2007
    haha wow! You know, when you write your own stuff, it will be damn interesting indeed. Where on earth did you think of that!? It's incredible. :) There is so much creativity and randomness, but not insane, just another way to link things together and it's so very interesting. Now of course they are sitting naked, so I want to know what two naked men are going to do.... haha hrm... confess love, make love and then yayayaaya PHEONIX TEARS! hahaa (sorry, I'm a mess! :P) Give me more, please? :P
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  • From misslala on September 11, 2007
    haha nice. The descriptions surrounding Draco and Harry were awesome. The way Draco felt with Harry watching him, his touches, etc. Awesome. :) I can't wait to see what you cook up next! LOL Wow... hrm... so how to make a Phoenix cry exactly? Hrm? I am very interested in this... cause I hope Harry and Draco having sex won't make them cry, LOL That would be like OMG you guys are terrible, LOL (j/k) I'm a dork. >.< UPDATE SOON! Please? :) Pwetty please.?
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  • From berkie88 on September 11, 2007
    Is the next going to be Draco's POV again? I like the switches.
    I was wondering, in the epilogue they said that Teddy came for dinner 4 times a week I think. did you change that? I know you said he hangs out with George most but... except for mentioning him in relation to Malfoy and maybe on the platform he hasn't been in the story at all!
    I really don't like Ginny anymore (or the rest of them). Ginny kept that she would die from Harry and she also knew he was not really in love with her but liked Malfoy even if he didn't... (and I think Luna knew he should be with Malfoy rather than the Weasley's if the portraits are any indication...) she's now trying to get them together I think?
    and Ron is as prejudiced as can be... I wonder how the rest of the family is? (how much they know, what they think of it etc.). they haven't been mentioned much.
    hope for more soon!
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