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Reviews for What Shakes The Elephant

By : Angelsfear
  • From rachxoxo on October 08, 2007
    First of all, this chapter certainly DOES NOT suck. None of the ones that you don't like ever do. This is literally the most un-sucking story on here. Really. And even though you don't know how you're going to continue this, I'll be awaitng the e-mail telling me there's a new chapter. Hang in there and don't let some guy ruin your life.

    -rach
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  • From on October 07, 2007
    First I just have to say that I LOVE this story! I was terribly angry with the ending of DH (as I'm sure many are) and am sooo happy that you decided to write this. The concept is great, the whole pureblood curses and all and Harry and Draco getting together because of their sons...oh I love it! I wish I had the time to comment on each and every chapter...but since I came in so late in the story I'm afraid that would take forever and you would probably fall asleep reading it anyway...so just know that I have loved every moment thus far. As for the last couple chapters...I love Harry's jealous / protective ways - so cute - not to mention Draco's reaction to it ( and the sex scene in the woods..mmmm so good). I hope they make the cure because well...Draco just cannot get sick or die from his blood pressure! I'm also greatly looking forward to hearing a little more about Draco. So update soon! Please?

    I just have one more thing to say and I'm not sure if this is the right place for it or not but I want to make sure you read it I HAVE to tell you that Memoirs of a Serpents Son is by far one of my favorite fanfics! I just finished reading it and oh dear lord...I'm almost speechless it was so good. I loved the way you wrote Draco (and Harry as well but I love Draco), it was perfect. You almost had me crying and made me utterly depressed during his sixth year. And then when he finally got together with Harry...it was just so...well there are no words it was just that good. I could go on for awhile with praises but I'll stop myself here and just say that it was amazing and now with that story and this one...well I'm frankly addicted to your writing...so now I shall leave and go check out your other stories while I wait for an update!


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  • From daynajones on October 07, 2007
    Great chapter, love jealous Harry, very cute. Will watch for more!
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  • From Mitamay on October 07, 2007
    I had to give a review after...ch. 18, I think. Damn, I can't even being to imagine how Harry must feel...I think I'd cry or something. That was a very strong chapter IMO, if it makes me wanna tear up...well, off to read somemore! EM
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  • From SoriaUndead on October 04, 2007
    Splendiferous! ^_^ but... Harry's isn't getting all... clingy... is he?
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  • From rachxoxo on October 03, 2007
    I'm sure you'll be able to solve all of the problems that have fallen into or collective laps. You're brilliant like that. I can't wait to hear Draco's story. It's about time he opened up a little.

    -rach
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  • From Lacegag on October 03, 2007
    Brilliant. Just absolutely brilliant. This has got to be one of the best fanfictions I've read. It really is quite good. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2007
    just oooooooone tiny itsy bitsy question, ok two:

    1 - Is James gonna die?

    2 - Are Al and Scorpius going to be a couple?

    thank you for your hard work! =D
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 02, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 49! Sooo James had seen them!? Something tells me Harry should check on his son more often...

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  • From RavenQueen on October 02, 2007
    Another great chapter, Daft! I love Al and Scop...too cute for words. And Draco soothing Harry at the end was precious. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From missleymisskai on October 02, 2007
    cut me off >>

    Al
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  • From missleymisskai on October 02, 2007
    Draft you are simiply amazing. Why wouldn't we stick with you!? You spoil us. I mean how many writers update like almost every day!? Now thats a treat.

    hehehehehe James is on the little secret now. xD What ever will happen with our heros!??! Dear god I see soo many different things that could happen in this story. The endless possiblies! ^^

    Al
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  • From murderaidx on October 02, 2007
    wow i can imagine how james is feeling, eventually he'll accept things

    and i just loved that little embrace at the end between harry and draco :]

    please update soon!
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  • From misslala on October 02, 2007
    You and those damn monuments are playing havoc with my emotions! lol They almost always make me cry in some way. James' attitude worries me. Even if he didn't really feel Draco was a bad influence, then his alienation, and sadness, not talking about it only going to make it worse. I like that they are sharing a room at the Inn. :) I'm hoping they have some more lovins before returning to the real world - but then again, I'm eager to see the outcome of things.
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  • From RachyMFrank on October 02, 2007
    I haven't finished reading all of this yet, I'm only on chapter 20, but I'm a little confused. If Ginny is dying because of a pureblood curse then wouldn't that mean that Lily wouldn't be effected? She's not pureblood because Harry is a halfblood. Or are you operating under the idea that two magical parents makes you pureblood? In which case Harry is a first generation pureblood and Lily is a second generation pureblood and therefore susceptible to the curse. But even if you are considering Lily a pureblood, would she really be effected by the Weasley curse since she wasn't born a Weasley but a Potter? If anything she'd have the Potter curse, which I assume would've been broken since James married a muggleborn. But if each pureblood child had a curse from both their mother's and their father's lines then they would be double cursed and probably extinct by now. And if the pureblood curses have been around for so many generations, but they are curable, why haven't cures been found by now? And it seems to me that a pureblood curse would be very concrete evidence that maintaining blood purity was a bad idea, if everyone in there family was dying why didn't the purebloods just start marrying muggleborns?
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