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Reviews for Yearning

By : BadkatPat
  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on August 08, 2007
    wow. when you gave me this story in bits and pieces, i thought it had a lot of potential. and when i finally saw it all in one big lump like this, i was pleased to find that i was right. this is an incredible story full of wonderful descriptions and intense longing.

    one of the things i really like about this fic, about the way you wrote it is that you can actually feel the desire they have for each other in this fic. it's almost tangible, they way they want each other. i really like that you can almost feel the hesitancy between the characters. they want to say something, they want to step up and out of their perfect little boxes and take that extra little step, but they are so scared, so afraid of being turned away of being denied the single thing that they want that they refuse to admit to themselves and to others that all they really want, all they've ever really wanted was to be with each other...

    another thing i really liked is how in character they were. i love that draco was still remorseful and yet, he was desperate to be with harry. and i liked that harry was scared and uncertain but still... he refused to do the things he needed to do to investigate his sexuality because he didn't have his friends there to support him, to hold his hand and tell him that it would be okay to be gay, that it would be okay to just... not be straight like everyone assumed he was. and i liked that harry still thought about everyone else before himself. and i love that draco was so cold and callous, even toward the end, when he didn't want to admit to any sort of feelings he might possibly have towards harry. even though we all know all he's ever wanted to do was bone the hell out of him.

    this is a great story. the characterization and the flow of the story is fluid. the descriptions, you know exactly what's going on, who's doing what, what everything looks like. you are aware of the places, the settings. you are aware of the way things are supposed to be. you aren't confused about anything.

    and it's simply a really good story. you should be proud of it.

    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 08, 2007
    OMG!!! The centerfold? Where can I get that mag?
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  • From NightLo on August 08, 2007
    Wow...hot MAN sex...yet it felt so RIGHTTT!!!!!!!! So perfect for the two!!!

    BTW, with the centerfold, would Harry get a better view of Draco's body?????
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  • From queenmorgan23 on August 08, 2007
    This was wonderful. I really liked it a lot. Nicely written. Thank you very much for sharing it. :-)
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  • From bananasforyou on August 08, 2007
    so hottt!!!!!!
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