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Reviews for Beyond the verge of Teasing

By : Adrasteia
  • From DB1 on August 10, 2007
    @1. lol awesome chapter, i can't wait to read more.

    *DB*
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  • From CarlaRush on August 09, 2007
    Not a bad start too your story, I'd like to see some more imagery in the next chapters. Describe thoughts, feelings and locations. This technique will help bring a reader into your world. Good luck, I look forward to the next chapter.
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