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Reviews for Seduction Costume

By : skim
  • From anniea on August 13, 2007
    oh poor harry but it was still yummy *kisses*
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  • From Briarrows69 on August 12, 2007
    Fenrir would totally get off on some kinky shit like that... good job, this is the only Fenrir/Harry that I've liked so far (besides my own, duh).

    I was looking at the other comments, and I'm presuming that you like hearing from readers since you responded, so here is my comment: I kind of felt like this was a great one-shot, but since you have plans to continue it, I think to make Fenrir and Harry 'mates' would be cliched (I know, I'm writing one of those, but mine was the first Harry/Fenrir so I have the right to call my story original, damnit!). Practically EVERY Fenrir/Harry story after mine has been "harry and fenrir are mates and bond, yay" or the "Harry gets raped and suffers, boo hoo". I really think your story has the potential to be original, especially with the original beginning... so as an author who loves this pairing and wants to see it done right, PLEASE use your talents (which you obviously have) and continue creating your new and different take on the Harry/Fenrir relationship

    Just a suggestion :)
    Love Briar
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  • From betelgeuse on August 10, 2007
    Please, tell me it's a WIP, please, please! I really love this pairing.
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  • From alma on August 10, 2007
    Oh! the possabilties. You can totally continue with this story! Fenrir could have bonded and mated with Harry? reason for getting permission from Harry first. Draco could be secretly obsessing over Harry also and Harry doesn't who to choose now?
    An angry, possesive, jealous Werewolf! totally hot.
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  • From VampireSerpent on August 10, 2007
    Brilliant
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  • From skim on August 10, 2007
    First of all, thanks to everyone who reviewed so far! It's really encouraging to see people who enjoy my writing!

    I decided to add more to this story.
    In light of that, I have been thinking of the following things:

    There are so many ways I can go from the first chapter that it will take me a couple of days as to where I should go with this.

    I also like really long chapters and will work on writing longer ones.

    I might change the title of the story as the story grows.

    I felt that the last part of the story was rushed. I was trying to finish fast enough so I could upload the story before I lost my courage to do so. Therefore, in the future, expect more detailed and longer sex scenes. I noticed I lack a lot of adjectives and noises. -_-

    Dialogue! I need to work on that...

    Anyways, before I start ranting on other things and losing my train of thought, the next chapter should be done no later than the end of next week. I have a lot of planning to do. However, this will ultimately end with Fenrir and Harry together. I don't think I'll make this a threesome, and I'll definitely be rereading Harry Potter for more information. If all goes well, after this story, I'll try out other pairings or other fanfiction such as Bleach :)!

    Till next week!
    skim




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  • From jenv on August 10, 2007
    will you add another chapter? id like to read it!
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  • From jenv on August 10, 2007
    great!
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  • From sanda on August 10, 2007
    good story
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  • From Aalto on August 10, 2007
    I like it. I like it a lot. Please do continue, I hope Harry is Fenrirs mate in this. Or maybe they could form a threesome with Draco.
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  • From lazycrazykitten on August 10, 2007
    I kind of want to see more of this. I could totally picture Harry trying to sneak back up to Gryffindor tower half naked. Then sneaking out again to see Fenrir.
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  • From gweasley on August 10, 2007
    Wow that was good espicaly for your first fic. You definatly have a lot of potential. I think you could go either way with this story you could leave it because as a one shot it is very good but it also has the potential to be a longer story if you had a story planed out. Either way this is a great starting point for your writing :)
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  • From calmchick on August 10, 2007
    Excellent story!
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  • From speedie234 on August 10, 2007
    I love it!

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