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Reviews for The Name in Red **COMPLETE**

By : Raug397
  • From ANON - Jackie on September 08, 2007
    *drool* Loved the contact in the new chapter.
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  • From Happyappy on September 08, 2007
    Just finished several chapters. Still loving the story. I loved Snape's internal conversation with himself. Should he, shouldn't he. That was just too much! The last chapter was a bit steamy, bet Harry didn't enjoy being in that cupboard too much with them. So glad at the end, they were starting to talk to each other slightly. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From sheherazade on September 04, 2007
    Ooooh, wow, that was one of the hottest kissing scenes I have EVER read.

    Absolutely divine, my dear; I really hope your classes don't interfere too much with this!

    But Sev is going to be furious when he finds out about Harry's pilfering, isn't he? I wonder if he's going to find out that Sarah's implicated. Eek. She'd better learn Occlumency, like, NOW!
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  • From vampkestrel on September 03, 2007
    holy mother of........... that was one fricking fantastic chapter my god if the fourplay was that good...*stares of into space drooling* sweet set up and lord have mercy what a lucky girl snape can pen me up in his store room anytime. LOL poor harry i love it when you scar his mind...hehhe
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  • From vampkestrel on September 01, 2007
    oohhh evil cliffy i can only wonder how she's going to *cough* distract him either way as long as he falls for it will befull of snape snogging goodness so i'm happy. LOL poor snape though if or when he finds out he's might be sad and think that's the only reason she's kissing him *hugs snape and gives him a lemon cookie* Great chapter though wonderful set up for the hijinks that will soon ensue
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  • From ANON - passtheasprin500 on August 31, 2007
    Loved the last chapter!!!! update soon!!!!
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  • From Marbil on August 29, 2007
    I love this paragraph, it describes him perfectly. "Snape took a deep breath, managing to slightly master his temper. Mastering it completely would be a herculean task of epic proportions."

    You started this chapter with some very atmospheric writing, it painted the picture very clearly for me. I also enjoyed the bits of humor you included. A story always needs some humor to be worth reading no matter what the 'angst queens' say, so keep it up and keep it in there.

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  • From sheherazade on August 28, 2007
    Ha ha, Harry is freaked right out.

    Lovely chapter; just the very idea of taking a duelling lesson from Snape is beyond hot somehow. It's interesting that he keeps doing this kissing-and-walking-away thing. We don't have a clue what's going on in his head, which is intriguing.
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  • From ANON - vampkestrel on August 28, 2007
    Oh yea totally awesome any reason to scars harry mind for life is fine by me hehehe ah lovely passionate chapter i'm totally envious of her.
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  • From ANON - s_blake on August 27, 2007
    I just read the first 10 chapters, and wanted to thank you for resurrecting poor Severus "I never had a life" Snape, post-DH. I'm glad to see that your heroine is showing signs of some feistiness, though The-Girl-with-Voldemort's-Eyes would probably intrigue SS no matter how mild-mannered she might be. Your writing is fluid and enjoyable. Looking forward to more!
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  • From Marbil on August 27, 2007
    Her story about the tree attacking the bullies was very original, one of the most original I've read when a witch who has no idea that she's not a Muggle talks about her experience with strange happenings during her childhood.

    I'm glad McGonagall finally mentioned sending her meals. The poor girl must not have eaten in at least 24 hours, she must have been starving. I wonder what her reaction will be when a house elf brings her meal? If I could have just one thing from the wizarding world, I'd choose a house elf. My house would love it, since I got my first computer 7 years ago I'm probably 6 1/2 years behind in my house work.
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  • From magpie79 on August 27, 2007
    nice chapter, i am feeling the need to fan myself in the manner of a Jane Austin heroine, a swoon worthy moment if ever there was one
    xx
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  • From Marbil on August 27, 2007
    Well, now I know her name and a bit of her history, but she's still very much a mystery. I'm wondering, what is it with Minerva's fascination with the girls eyes; and what did Severus do to Sarah's eyes when Minerva was leaving? Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.
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  • From ANON - Jackie on August 26, 2007
    I adore this story!
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Marbil on August 26, 2007
    Well I still don't know anything about her. Her reaction to them reminded me of a movie, I think it was Nell but I'm not sure; anyway, the girl reacted to strangers in the same way this girl did. The girl really intrigues me, I am anxious to know more about her; but that will have to wait until tomorrow.
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