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Reviews for The Name in Red **COMPLETE**

By : Raug397
  • From Raug397 on August 26, 2007
    I would love to e-mail you about updates, Trickie Woo! But your e-mail seems to be hidden and you didn't leave an e-mail address for me! >.< If you read this (which I am hoping you will!) feel free to e-mail me at Raug397@yahoo.com to leave me your e-mail address, and I will be happy to update you when I post new chapters!
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  • From Marbil on August 26, 2007
    Very well written, by the time she reached the edge of the Forbidden Forest you had me on pins and needles. I don't know anything about her, yet like Severus, you had me feeling empathy for her.

    I'm leaving for vacation in two weeks and I'll be out of the country and without a computer for three weeks so I don't have much time to read fan fic now with all the packing and preparations, but I'm going to try to read all that you have posted so far. Since AFF doesn't have an update alert function, would you email me whenever you post an update? This would be very helpful to me since I plan to keep reading your story and my memory needs a nudge as I get older. I will especially need to be reminded when I get back at the end of next month, by that time I'll have forgotten what stories I'm reading.
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  • From sheherazade on August 26, 2007
    Oooh, he kissed her, he kissed her! And he was pretty lucky that she didn't fall asleep while he was going through his lengthy internal debate ;-). Very sweet, I love his healing hands performance too. Did McGonagall realise what she was doing when she raised the green-eyed monster in Severus by comparing her to Harry?

    This is building up nice and slowly; very convincing.
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  • From ANON - Deandra on August 26, 2007
    This chapter is just so delicious! I am loving your story! Very well written and I can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - vampkestrel on August 26, 2007
    ooh nice chapter mmmm snapey kissy face gotta love it. I like the fact that even though this has a lovely romantic plot you don't become overly absorbed in it you still have the characters working out the mystery and the big picture rather then throwing in a random bad guy at the end and piecing it with a evil doer monolouge. Kudos. Alot of times people lose sight of the complete story and focus on the fan service but not you! not that i don't like fan service i like it very much but the plot is the most important. that was a bit rambling all in all i love your fic so far.
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  • From ANON - passtheasprin500 on August 25, 2007
    i loved the last chapter!! it was so sweet! update soon!!
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  • From ccino49 on August 25, 2007
    Arrrgh! All that build up, and a peck on the lips. You really are cruel. LOL. Honest though, it was quite sweet. So will the trio give in to their urges and go to the Ministry. Maybe they coud pretent to be intersted in working in the obliviation dept and ask to look round. Yeah right, like that's gonna happen.
    ccino
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  • From sheherazade on August 24, 2007
    Oh, I did enjoy Snape's little eye exam; he's a tease, isn't he?

    Way to go, Harry, giving Sarah the condensed version of seven books' worth of action in an afternoon. I wouldn't envy him that task.

    So we've got mystery, plot and sexual tension going on...what could happen next?
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  • From vampkestrel on August 24, 2007
    hehe naughty snape love the interaction between them can't wait to find out how our favorite potions master survived nagini also wonderfuly long chapter too
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  • From sheherazade on August 22, 2007
    First of all, sorry for asking a question you'd already answered in the story. Duh, sheherazade. I blame my horrible habit of skim-reading all the non-Snape bits of a story. Very naughty.

    Poor Sarah with those red eyes. What could be the meaning of it? Does she have a relationship/connection with Voldemort?

    She certainly seems to be developing a connection with the dour Potions Master. I want to read more.
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  • From vampkestrel on August 21, 2007
    whoot nice long chapter and snape in a robe even better *drools*
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  • From ccino49 on August 21, 2007
    Yeh. I was right about her eyes being red. (Smugly smiling) I'm glad she's making friends, but oh, she and Snape, something is definately blossoming on the horizon.
    Hurry hurry..
    ccino
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  • From ccino49 on August 20, 2007
    he he. What a turn about. I think actually enjoyed his little trip to Diagon Alley. Well sort of anyway. Sarah certainly affected him enough to put him off his apparition. Good job they didn't splinch. lol.
    Well Harry's met her and he'll probably put Hermione onto the case. She always comes up with the answers. Now Sarah ans Snape are going to be together quite a lot in the evenings. I hope that means we're leading up to juicy lemons. Maybe even a whole grove of them. (She writes hopefully) Marti I love your stirytelling. I can see it in my mind as I'm reading. Please hurry with the next chappy. I was quite put out about the anagam. I convinced myself I was right about that. Typical me that.
    ccino
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  • From Raug397 on August 20, 2007
    Yep, they're back completing their seventh year. I included a couple paragraphs in chapter 5 roughly explaining the situation. Maybe you missed them!!
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  • From sheherazade on August 20, 2007
    Lessons with Snape - great latitude for rampant snarkiness there.

    Has Harry gone back to complete his seventh year? I like this being post-DH with a living Snape and am looking forward to hearing his tale of survival.
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