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Reviews for Jump Into the Light

By : RaveXTM
  • From ANON - katlin malfoy on March 20, 2013
    i wasnt sure if i would like this story honestly i've been looking for inspiration in my own writting (i dont write fan fiction) but i was reading this and even though this never happened in the harry potter world it felt real i dont think that makes any sense but even though its not bright and pretty and full of rainboys i loved this it was absolutely effing fantastic
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  • From lucyespinosa88 on December 22, 2007
    Wow, that was fucked up. And I loved every word of it...
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  • From ANON - Sly on August 15, 2007
    Ive read alot of fics and this is the first one I ever wanted to review. It was so perfict. I cant even think of words to describe how much I loved the "I fuck you because" part. and I have always thought that D/H sould be bread out of hate never fluff. The torture the mental anguish all wonderfully done. I can t think of more ways to say I enjoyed it but just know I really did!
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  • From MisstressNicole on August 14, 2007
    I had to read it again. Most likely I'll be reading it yet again. Yes there are some mistakes in it, puncuation, spelling (mainly typos) but that's it.
    I've always believed that the wall between love and hate was cracked, but it seems as if it's crumbled in some places, nonexistant in others. I feel...I feel...like I need a cigarette.

    ~~20 Minutes later~~

    I opened my drawer and found my pack empty. Well anyway this story held so much feeling. Feeling that I find my filled with often. I don't believe in falling in love. The way people talk about it, it seems so sacred. How can you fall out of it? It's impossible. To many people equate love with lust. I love my mother and I love my sister. I love my friends that have become family to me. I don't lust after them. Draco and Harry loved each other, but it wasn't about sex. It was a feeling. You can love someone and not like them. People don't get that, they don't understand it when I tell them. I can only explain it in so many words. I love, I hate and I fight both emotions. Both feelings. Thank you for sharing this. It touched something really deep in me.
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 14, 2007
    Holy moly! Draco let him. Helped him. He hated him enough to watch him die. Loved him enough to hate.
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  • From MisstressNicole on August 14, 2007
    What the fuck? What the hell? That's all I can keep asking myself. It's like I understand it but I don't want to believe it. I tasted it but I rather not chew. I bought it but i rather throw it out. Its' not that it has to be explained because I grasped it, but I guess now I just have to come to come to terms with it. This may take some times.

    ~hour later~

    Okay. You're writing is rhythmic and captivating. You're words wrap around us and keep us reading even when we know what is going to happen. While the fic is definitely dark it's good. Very well written and presented. Nice use of the lyrics. The only criticism I have is that you inserted the song lyrics in German and then in English. You could just leave links, it's easier and it doesn't take away from the feel of the story. Not bad criticism, see!

    ~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper

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