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Reviews for Silencio

By : AkashaTheKitty
  • From Clothclouds on October 03, 2007
    nice story. in chapter two, end. normally, people storm slowly, so others can see they are mad. that is the purpose of storming. *BUT* you said that he stormed as if chased by the dark lord. that would imply that he went quickly, which clashes with stormed. im trying my hand at constructive crit, lol sorry if a tad verbose.
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  • From ANON - Verie on October 03, 2007
    Comment for Chapter 10:

    ...And that is the reason why I'm stuck on this ship.
    You just opened the unknown reason for me.
    Brilliant.

    For Chapter 11:
    It never gets boring.. The stories is on full temp!
    Keep going.
    Update soon Please?

    Verie
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  • From ANON - fatalxbeautee on October 03, 2007
    All I have to say is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    and OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!

    not to mention I WANT TO KILL YOU!

    we can forget about BUT YOU ROCK AND I LOVE YOU!

    last but not least PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - livelifelovehgdm on October 03, 2007
    I love the you research! It makes the story all the more beliveable. The emotions were so intense, I was getting freaked out! I still loved it anyways! I hope I see an update soon! This makes my day! (I'm not kidding, I failed my Calc test today :)

    geo
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  • From princesspeach on October 03, 2007
    *Sigh* these last chapters were just SO amazing. I am almost afraid of what is going to happen... I hope Ginny isn't the downfall of it all! Damn you Ginny! I guess I will have to carry my computer around with me from now on so i don't miss your next update because I need to know what happens, like now. I love this so much!
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  • From Kaley on October 03, 2007
    more, more, more, more, more
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  • From luvhp on October 03, 2007
    WOW!!!!!
    Yes, this is very much like a soap. Up, down, happy, mad. You have really, REALLY captured Draco and I applaud you for that. I have my own stories that he is NOTHING lie the books cause I just can't get it.
    From the sweet kiss after their love making to the coldness he showed her in the hallway, seeing her in the Great Hall and then finding her in that room, my heart was pounding, anticipating what was going to happen. Would he break it off? Would he finally admit how he felt? Well, he did tell her the truth. It would get them all killed if they found out. And to throw Ginny in the mix of finding them kissing, that was freakin' AWESOME!
    Looking forward to your next installment. What will she tell Ginny?? Ooohhhh.
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  • From ANON - cass on October 03, 2007
    Her whole "He loves me, he loves me not" inner dialogue is just so accurate. How she desperately tries to find that little something in his words to give her hope, how hope comes and goes. I love this chapter and how close you come to real life.
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  • From titfortat on October 03, 2007
    Oh on. You are a master at your craft. I loved that Chapter. But can I just saysomething after re reading your story I notice that Draco got a happy off of Hermione in Chapter 9. But poor Hermione has been left hanging. Surly the boys dont get to have all the fun. :)

    Once agin Thankyou so much for the update Im on tender hooks to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - MM13 on October 03, 2007
    You are indeed evil. Building up that romantic scene where she figures he really does like her, only to ruin it... I like it.

    Also the insight into her confusion and angst is good I think. I agree that being smart doesn't make you better to handle emotions at all. Actually I would almost say it's the opposite. Smart people tend to think too much, sometimes too much for their own good.
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  • From chickaboo on October 03, 2007
    Uh-oh. That's not good. Let's just hope she can convince Ginny not to say anything. Can't wait for more!
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  • From bananasforyou on October 03, 2007
    great!
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  • From ANON - tweetmoobaa on October 03, 2007
    oh my gosh, here i was thinking that all the lovey dovey stuff would come along next, and he'd perhaps show his love but no! you changed it so they're even more distant now! =O anticipating your next chapter =) loving it =)
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  • From ANON - Katya on October 02, 2007
    Wonderful story! Please, please give it a happy ending! I love the Hermione/Draco pairing, and I like how you've made this story plausible. Keep wirtiong, and maybe a somewhat less plausible happy future for them...
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 28, 2007
    hey! i just read this story for the first time! it's really good, please keep going! it's nice to see their relationship grow, please keep up the great work!

    please less fighting though...I'm not requesting fluffy fluff...but the constant fighting and stubbornness from Hermione is just really redundant and it feels like nothing is progressing. that's just a request though, it's your story and you're the author! thanks so much for writing such an interesting, unique story!

    :-D
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