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Reviews for Silencio

By : AkashaTheKitty

From chickaboo on September 24, 2007
That was SO HOT! Mmmmm-mmmm yummy smutty goodness! Can't wait for more!
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From mhaj78 on September 24, 2007
omg do you want me to write your essays for you? I so will if it means i get another FANTASTIC chap like this one SOON!!!!!
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From ANON - fatalxbeautee and lornfaer on September 24, 2007
This what happened when we read your story:

xx_yeniferr: Hi
lynzskycastle: She updated
lynzskycastle: Hi
xx_yeniferr: GASP
lynzskycastle: Yes
xx_yeniferr: BE RIGHT BACK
lynzskycastle: I just opened it
xx_yeniferr: I LOVE YOU
lynzskycastle: I ove you too
lynzskycastle: love*
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lynzskycastle: I KNOW
lynzskycastle: I JUST FINISHED IT
lynzskycastle: Dsakbhgl;a
xx_yeniferr: ME TOO
lynzskycastle: ...okay
lynzskycastle: that's scary
lynzskycastle: we finished at at like
lynzskycastle: exactly the same time
lynzskycastle: As I read much
xx_yeniferr: that IS really scary
lynzskycastle: the thing lit up
lynzskycastle: Oi.
xx_yeniferr: DUDE
lynzskycastle: Anyway OAMGFa
xx_yeniferr: I KNOW
lynzskycastle: HOLY CRAP.
xx_yeniferr: I'm out of breath, I got so like...
xx_yeniferr: I got an adrenaline rush from that.
xx_yeniferr: OMG
lynzskycastle: I know. It's CRAZY
xx_yeniferr: Do you know what my review is going to be?
xx_yeniferr: Our conve.
xx_yeniferr: *convo.
lynzskycastle: Is a good plan
xx_yeniferr: Oui
xx_yeniferr: I can make the review from both of us.
xx_yeniferr: I will
lynzskycastle: Okay
lynzskycastle: sounds gewd.

This is what your fic does to us. Be proud and scared. VERY proud and scared.
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From SoftObsidian74 on September 24, 2007
I LOVE you!! You know just how to write Draco for a sex scene...love this story....keep going girl.
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From Mitamay on September 24, 2007
Okay...I'm offically HOOKED on this het pairing! This is a rare one for me in the HP fics! That's two Draco/Hermione fics I'm hooked on now! More! ASAP! *grins* EM
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From ANON - Luna on September 24, 2007
I have to tell you that I simply adore this story. You have a style and flow that keeps me coming back for more. I absolutely where you're going with this tale and I'm really anxious to see what else you have in store for this fabulous couple. Lastly, keep up the good work and keep writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you very soon!!!

~Luna
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From ANON - Jenn on September 23, 2007
*applauds* Oh lordy, I look forward to the big reveal whenever that happens. I love that they still get pissy at each other, but you've moved them slowly enough towards this time where they can banter comfortably. Some stories they go from hate to fluff and it doesn't make sense. You've walked them through hate to passion to tentative friendship and I adore it. Awesomeness!

Only one issue of criticism - there's never a description of location. I'm making it up in my head as I read (which is a perk as a reader), but then again, it's slightly disorienting to never know where someone is in space or what the area looks like. I'm not saying go Hemingway on it and take a whole page to describe the locale, but some orientation in space-time would be awesome.
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From ichiruki on September 23, 2007
lol ignore the whining in my previous review about my e-mail seeing as I forgot to actually check it and see a heads up -blushes-
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From mariecke22 on September 23, 2007
i like the story very much so far. Good plot with some goos smut!!!
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From titfortat on September 22, 2007
Loved it loved it. Thankyou

This I am really likeing about this story Is that you can I can feel slowly Draco and Hermione falling in love with each other or at least falling very deeply it is slowly moving past the lust stage of were we where when the story first started. It is perecftly paced.

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From TMaria on September 22, 2007
you're story is amazing!
I havent been able to stop reading it!

Hope there's more soon!!! xx
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From ANON - syren on September 22, 2007
oh my god. you're amazing. The sleepy conversations they have are darling.
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From ANON - Draconas on September 22, 2007
Um, so hot, that I am literally warmer. And I ended the chapter going, "Wait, what, why am I in this computer chair with no hot man...?"

:) I REALLY enjoy this story.
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From SoftObsidian74 on September 22, 2007
It was really cool how you wrote Hermione's first blow job!!! Sexy as usual..you never disapoint...keep it coming : )
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From ichiruki on September 21, 2007
Well shit, I didn't see this at the top and almost missed it! As always I loved every moment of it. I feel really lazy compared to your updating speed, and I don't even have school to contend with. So I'm going to be a hypocrite and tell you to hurry up with that next chapter cause I love your story and true to my word I've been reviewing every chapter, even that awesome one shot you did.

And yes the pms craziness was great b/c let's be honest in real life there are other things you can do to get off besides "that" and still be surfing that crimson tide. Plus I loved the banter and the tension that came from it, and how Draco is really growing to need her, he's come so much further than that first chapter eh? lol ^_^

If you start an e-mail list for updates so we don't miss new chapters put me down at ichi.ruki@yahoo.com, I'm not entirely fond of this new ordering of stories that update.

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