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Reviews for Silencio

By : AkashaTheKitty
  • From Bonza87 on September 06, 2007
    Akasha,

    I'm impressed! You've stayed true to the canon characters as much as is possible given that their actions are so out of context with the plot of the novels.

    This whole fic is brilliantly written and I really enjoyed reading it up to this point.. I do wander though, what comes next? Where can this possibly end? And most of all, who's going to be the one to find them out?

    I really look forward to seeing more of this fic, well done :)

    Regards,

    Bonza87
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  • From LeftInnocenceBehind on September 05, 2007
    Damn right something's gotta give! XP
    *sigh* very glad you're still going, very very happy about it :-)
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  • From ANON - Snowe on September 04, 2007
    I really like this fic--the back-and-forth between them, the fighting for dominance, is very well done. The smut's pretty nice, too! :)
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  • From ichiruki on September 04, 2007
    like it! I'm sure Draco can't have his way this time, but I think from that hint he maybe getting something his way next???

    ^_-
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  • From princesspeach on September 04, 2007
    You post really quickly for having such long and well written chapters. I'm really glad to hear you plan on finishing this, it's too good to stop now!
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  • From ichiruki on September 04, 2007
    lol, they can't be IC forever or can they? ^_^

    That's the fun in writing fanfic, you get to puppet them into situations but soon discover there's a process of evolution to it, even if you didn't really think it in the beginning. You start out with them as they are (or something close to what they are when you borrowed them), maneuver them and as you proceed you find out you are developing their characters. As you develop your story they are IC as you are writing how they change, I bet OOC if is if Hermione becomes the slut of Hogwarts and fucks anything that wiggles and Draco is a sub bottom that champions elfish welfare and muggleborn rights lol. Ya know?

    I wouldn't let anyone bash you for it if they aren't perfectly IC according to "canon" or whatever pish-posh. Your story is the "canon" you should go by for your use of the characters, stay true to that and you can't go wrong cause they'll be believable and so will the story. They only go OOC when you've been developing this thing and then make them go all wonky with no explanation unless you intend to throw us a bit of a mystery of course lol. ^_-

    Anyway keep it up! I love your story and I look forward to seeing it develop!
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  • From Laurachan on September 01, 2007
    I find your characters being quite IC ;) I'm liking very much the "relationship" which is forming between Draco and Hermione, how cute that he doesn't want anyone else but her, ahahah! I hope you update soon because I'm very intrigued, good job!
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  • From princesspeach on August 31, 2007
    Amazing as always. I am equally jealous of and thankful for your wonderful writing talent. You better not stop any time soon!
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  • From WebWalker on August 31, 2007
    WOW! What an explosive fic! I can actually see this sort of by-play between these 2 characters taking place. Great writing...Keep up the good work!!
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  • From Sparkykiki on August 28, 2007
    Nice! I like how you're keeping them in character...Can't wait to see what they do next! :D
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  • From princesspeach on August 27, 2007
    Still loving this. You do the feelings and personalities so perfectly, I'm sorry I just don't have any constructive criticism to offer. Just keep doing what you're doing!
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  • From ichiruki on August 27, 2007
    Wooo-hooo! Loved it! Also liked that little twist at the end. I liked your writing in this chapter, esp the bit about the mirror version of Hermione and how it takes some balance work to stay on that broom lol people always say "ooo it's because of quidditch they're all defined" but they never give one thought to a "how" or ever try to explain it in an entertaining way, anyways very well done :)
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  • From gordongirl18 on August 27, 2007
    This has got to be one of the Draco/Hermione stories on this site! I think you've captured the characters perfectly! I do think it would be interesting to do a chapter from Draco's POV, but then again who knows what goes on in the minds of boys? Great job on this story. I'm glad I found it.
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  • From missbja on August 27, 2007
    I'm not very good at real and good criticism. Can I just that I will kill you if you don't continue this story? (hope this is a positive comment)

    I'M LOVING IT ALL THE WAY THROUGH !!!!! :D

    I love Confused!Draco.
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  • From ANON - Carol on August 24, 2007
    hi, Love the story please update. They are really in charakter. Please write more!!
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