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Reviews for Silencio

By : AkashaTheKitty
  • From ANON - Miss NIbbles on August 23, 2007
    I must say, this story has come along so nicely. My editing suggestions really couldn't have helped much if it hadn't had been so good to begin with. He finally sounds like HIM, instead of like a girl's feelings trapped in a boy :P Kudos! I can't wait to read the next part.
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  • From missbja on August 21, 2007
    This is amazing! I love the Draco I-so-hate-you-but-I-desire-at-the-same-time.

    continue please!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - mishtidoi on August 21, 2007
    this story is coming along brilliantly - the pacing, the humour, the undercurrents of attraction...i loved the line abt how conveniently located all the empty classrooms were, btw :-D great job!
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  • From bananasforyou on August 21, 2007
    i sooo loved it !!!!!!:)
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  • From ichiruki on August 20, 2007
    I'm so glad you decided to continue! I want to see where this goes.
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  • From princesspeach on August 20, 2007
    Another awesome chapter. I can't believe english isn't your first language. You should be betaing for me! I didn't see one single itty bitty mistake, and I really hope you don't stop this story any time soon. It's too good and you are too good of a writer to keep your creative talent from the world. I'll be waiting semi-patiently for the next installment :)
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on August 20, 2007
    Wow! Another awesome chapter! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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  • From wudelfin on August 20, 2007
    god he such a bitch!! LOL!!! hope she turns this on his nicely...
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  • From LeftInnocenceBehind on August 20, 2007
    Apparently, not being a native english speaker/writer makes you even better at spelling, grammar, and rhetoric than natives! I loved your description in the change of attitudes, and I'm wishing for you to add to this, or write another bit of amazing-ness, but this is perfect as is. :-)
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  • From princesspeach on August 19, 2007
    I thought this was really good, and you did portray Draco really well which I am having a hard time doing at the moment, so I know it isn't easy. If DarkPheonix wants to read a story where "Malfoy accosts Hermione and she basically makes mincemeat of him," then they can write one themselves! You can't please everybody :)
    I would beta your next chapter for grammar mistakes and spelling if you can't find anyone else to, but I can't promise perfection. Seriously though, awesome work, keep it up!
    -Lizzy
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  • From DavidL on August 19, 2007
    Reading this story I find myself sighing and saying "not again" This basic plot has been done so many times. The details vary of course but in the end it's really just the same story. For once it would be nice to have a story where Malfoy accosts Hermione and she basically makes mincemeat of him. I know that wouldn't fit in with the whole domination/submission bondage perversion so many D/Hr shippers get off on but it would at least be different.
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  • From ANON - rantelwolfrider on August 17, 2007
    I really think that you portray the characters accurately in this, which is seems to be *really* hard for people to do in Draco's case. So kudos! It's also refreshing to see accurate spelling and grammar in a fic, especially a one-shot. If you're up for writing a sequel or any other HP fics, I'd definitely check them out. As I said, I think you've got the portrayal of Draco down pretty much perfectly, and there's a lot you could do with it.
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  • From undercoverfreak on August 17, 2007
    You sooo need to make this a couple of more chapaters long!!
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  • From ichiruki on August 17, 2007
    Can this so not be a one shot? Can we have a story? Pleeeasseee! I loved your writing style (I laughed at parts and was on edge at others!) and the way you worked this story. I would love to see him break down even more lol. Really bravo to what you've written! If you write more I promise to review and rate every chapter!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 16, 2007
    Hey, not bad..wish it was longer with more chapters...you're a pretty good writer..you should continue this..
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