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Reviews for Conquest Is Easy. Control Is Not

By : FlorenceWeasleySnape
  • From wishyouwere on March 05, 2008
    This is a really well written story. Although I have seen a few out there in the fandom that use the apprentice story idea, yours in one of the more original. I always like the meddling Dumbledore, who is looking out for the happiness and well being of his potions master. I also like a darker Severus, and you have developed that element to his character beautifully.
    I did start to figure out that the snow globe might be a port key, or even though that the spot where they were going to send Severus and Hermione was in the snow globe. Quiet, beautiful undisturbed yet they can be check on by anyone looking at the globe.
    I still wonder about the believability of Severus making a shoddy batch of contraceptive potion. Maybe his subconscious was at work? Maybe he really did want Hermione to get pregnant, on some level anyway. Keep up the great writing. I cannot wait for more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 05, 2008
    Another great chapter. I hope that Hermione and Severus can talk to each other now that Dumbledore has them locked together. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From Queeny on January 11, 2008
    I LOVE this story!!!!
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  • From sambsj on December 09, 2007
    ooh! I'm really liking this story. Enough lemons to make it satisfying but then a nice plot behind it all to ensure that it all ends rather nicely.

    And you are forgiven for the grammar errors that I mentioned in the last one. Didn't realise that English wasn't your first language. Then I will say, as English being my first language, that aside from a few incorrect usages of words or two many words in a sentence, you used a few verb cases that not many English-speaking people would know to use because it is something that doesn't get taught properly. I.e. The Subjunctive case - "If I were to do......" as you have written or similar anyway, whereas a lot of people use "If I was to .....", which is incorrect.

    But I'm very much looking forward to reading what happens next. A quick question, are your betas naturalised English speakers or have they just been able to learn it very well? I say this because a natural-born English speaker will pick up on errors much easier than someone who isn't.

    Anyway, I'm loving the story and best of luck in completing it. I know how hard it is to keep writing stories and I can empathise with you on the pressure that a lot of readers are putting on you to finish it.

    ~ Sam.
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on December 08, 2007
    Brilliant, just brilliant! I can't wait to read more and more and more and more...
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  • From snapeluva on December 07, 2007
    I just got into this story and find it captivating. Your english is great-you can't tell it's not your first language. I hope the next chapter comes soon!!
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  • From jacobslove on December 07, 2007
    Ohwow. Great chapter. Cannotw ait fo rmore
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 06, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From sambsj on December 06, 2007
    Holy shit. This is fucking awesome. Just be aware of some spelling errors and wrong usage of words (that I'm sure the spellcheck didn't pick up since they were proper words, such as 'an' instead of 'and' and so on. But others have probably pointed this out.

    But, once again, this is fucking awesome.
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  • From GypsyWitch on December 06, 2007
    OMG you're BACK!!

    I've missed this story, and am so happy to hear that you'll be around more often... though sad to hear the story will end before the new year. I guess we all silently pray that these stories never end.

    Brilliant chapter as always!!

    Sari
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 06, 2007
    This was a great chapter. I hope that Albus, Minerva, and Poppy, along with Hermione can convince Severus that he will be a great father. I don't think Hermione could ever get rid of the baby. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 06, 2007
    Another excellent chapter! I very much loved the part with the three of them invisible in the hospital wing; i'm still laughing about that! ^___^
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  • From Kopfstand on December 02, 2007
    This is so mean... Please UPDATE soon!! :D
    Very very mean cliffhanger!! ...I love your story
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  • From rageinsilence on December 01, 2007
    I really love this story. I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From RoseEvans on November 26, 2007
    I came upon the story last night and I must say it's grate!!!! I hope you update soon.
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