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Reviews for Prince of the Land of …Stench? Poor Sirius!

By : BettySheridan
  • From acidqueen on August 22, 2007
    damn you keep teasing me!!!!

    I like this, its short sweet and straight to the point. I think tho, that maybe save my sanity, to make the chappies a wee bit longer. But you know, that's just my preferred readin style, if it's you thing...than keep at it. Lets face it, nothing is gonna stop me reading this, except maybe death...and even then, im finding the nearest internet cafe!!!

    I liked it, and keep going...please
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  • From MidnightPhantom86 on August 22, 2007
    That would explain what happened to Sirus when he fell through the veil. :D Hm...will everyone still remember Hermione and buy Ron's story, or will they dig deeper? I personally wouldn't take any story of Ron's by the surface value. Adding Jareth to any story bounds to make things more interesting. I can hardly wait until the next chapter!
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  • From Madettica on August 21, 2007
    Cute idea, but his Name is Jareth hun ;)
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  • From haahaafunnystuff on August 21, 2007
    i'm just going to say this: i love it :D please update eventually ^_^
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  • From acidqueen on August 20, 2007
    OH MY HOLY FUCKING GOD!!!!

    sorry for the language.

    I watched that film like two days ago!!! and i was sitting thinking that someone should do a FanFic around it (tho i was more hoping for Jaret to you know....anyway) and look!! You did!!!

    It is the freakiest coninquidinkle of the past week...Me sitting here listening to the sound track...and you freaking well writing it w00pw00pw00pw000pw00pw00pw00pw00pw00pw00pw00p

    *clears throat* now i got that out my system

    I like where your going with this ("Hedgehog!!!" very funi!!) I am unsurprised that Ron couldnt find his way in, i think the boy would have a hard time finding his own arse without a map!

    Im not too sure about Jaret's voice in this, he seems a little too...nice and is explaining things. But that is a personal thing i think and it depends on how an individual sees the character (prooves its an awesome film) so you know, not a critisism, but an observation from a fan of the film. But i like how you've written everyone else.

    I'm interested to find out if any of the other characters from the film will be a appering in this. Or will it be the bare minimum due to this being a HPFF?
    Will Jaret be singing? Coz thats his thing, that and that divine coat from the dream sequence (Give it to Sirius!!! he would look so fine in it...or give it to me, eithers good)

    I have about a million other questions, but its late and ive been drinking too much tea (can you tell, the spelling gives it away)

    I'm hooked and i demand more...or i'll cry!

    I really am enjoying the concept, and i cant wait to see where you're going to go with this.

    acidqueen (who is off to listen to Dance Magic for the 50th time today)

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