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Reviews for Potions and Parchment Match

By : chelleybelle
  • From mhaj78 on October 03, 2007
    OH OH OH...I LOVE LUNA!!!! Chelleybelle, you rock. What a fabulous chapter! Sigh. I love it.

    I love that she's so fiercely determined to raise Natalie--and sexually voracious, too! I think it was great how you pointed out he hadn't thought of her sexually before...she is very non-sexual in the book and even so in most fanfics--so you really fit the character...and then SHATTERED it!! In a good way!

    And Neville and Millie...so glad that works out. Great solution with the fine and the need to marry quickly and all. Well done!

    But Ron evanescoed!! Yikes!! How will they get him back? (Really, I don't care if they do...I'm pretty much over Ron Weasley).

    As always, fabulous chapter. My life feels complete when I get an update from you! Thanks!
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  • From unknown001397 on October 03, 2007
    Thank you for answering my question. No I don't go for the gay couple thing, I was just curious of what the ministry would do? I think that would have one hell of a bloody time with that eh? I have been told that my curiousty will be the death me lol. I do love you story please update soon.
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  • From chelleybelle on October 03, 2007
    unknown: i don't know what the ministry would do for gay couples. in this story i didn't create any slash pairings...if you like them, read my soul bound story its a slash with harry and draco. in this one i have concentrated on heterosexual pairings...
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  • From unknown001397 on October 03, 2007
    I love this story. I only began reading Draco and Hermione fics not to long ago. I was hooked just reading the first chapter so it took my interest fron the start. I was just curious what does the ministry do if the witch or wizard is gay. How do that go about matching them up with someone. Sorry if this question has already been asked.
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  • From Annabelle on October 02, 2007
    I love the story so far. Neville and Millie getting together is great. Please don't kill them! If you have to kill someone make it Ron, but only after Molly hexes him!
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  • From seventh on October 02, 2007
    My first time reading the fic and I think I'm hooked! I like this take of the law, very interesting. At first, I thought you were gonna hook up Snape and Harry since you said that it doesn't recognize sex and age...hahaha.

    Interesting scenes. Although, I'm surprised that no one mention your misspelling of Blaise Zabini's name. That's the only thing in the story that makes me cringe everytime I read his scenes. I'm looking forward to your future chapters, I really like where this is going.
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  • From Pumkin on October 02, 2007
    never saw that one coming. i can't wait to see what you do next. please update soon.
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  • From myangeldraco on October 02, 2007
    I think Neville and Millie will be good together, I don't think a death scene would be a good idea because the story doesn't touch on that level it's more romance/comedy, but it's up to you I guess it depends on the circumstances? I don't know? do what sound's right to you and UPDATE SOON AGAIN PLEASE LOL!!!
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  • From Rannapulla on October 02, 2007
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!! what a twist!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I want to hear about Ron's and Romilda's reactions to the new marriage. Also try not to kill them Ron may be a git but he's not evil.
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  • From nonentity on October 02, 2007
    Wasn't expecting that at all. It seemed that Millie and Ron's relationship was improving for a while--Ron would do anything for sex and hence be tolerable, and Romilda was starting to be less obnoxious as she started respecting Neville. I love the Neville/Millie ship. I suspect they may still get in legal trouble for flouting the lottery. Wouldn't Ron and Romilda just get fed back into the lottery and may not get each other? I rather that Ron and Romilda slowly and funnily start gaining some sort of maturity. I'm not so keen on death scenes, but it's your story.

    Love those teenage hormones between Draco and Hermione and Blaise and Ginny.
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  • From mhaj78 on October 02, 2007
    NO NO NO

    NO DEATH SCENE!!!!!!!

    Crisis. I love that you put them together! OMG I did not see that coming. Also, I am so excited that you updated!! Sheesh, it made my day!

    I just adore marriage law fics and this is a WONDERFUL one. More, please! :)
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  • From jdakt2 on October 02, 2007
    Well I am highly enjoying the sudden plot twist. I like your take on Neville. Keep going.
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on September 30, 2007
    RE: chapter 17
    Very well plotted out storyline. I enjoy it very much. I'm looking forward to further installments. Good luck with your schooling. Keep up the good work both academically and literary!

    [Only one or two minor constructive criticisms:
    1)the usage of to instead of too, and
    2) a few cases in which you lost track of whose body part was doing what to whom and thus using the wrong pronoun, other than that, no problems.]

    Take care ... =D
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  • From RayneBlack on September 30, 2007
    BLOODY HELL!!!
    You must continue!!
    It is really good.
    I can't wait for more.

    Great Job,
    Angel
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