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Reviews for Potions and Parchment Match

By : chelleybelle
  • From TheSlytherinPhoenix on April 29, 2020

    This story was also a very good read. I enjoyed this very much and also read it in a day.


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  • From ANON - Lina on March 22, 2015
    Brilliant work. I read quite enough, but I had to read your story without a break...really wonderful.
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  • From Yoffee on March 20, 2015
    I am so sad i reached the end of this story lolol. Like mourning a friend of something xD
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  • From Yoffee on March 20, 2015
    It was beyond worth wading through 47 pages and coming across this story. It is everything i have ever wanted in a post harry potter fanfiction, and written brilliantly. The suspensful cliff-hangers! I couldnt put it down. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this!
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  • From Jacob_Malfoy on January 31, 2014
    nicely done
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  • From anajandreia on March 11, 2013
    You are right. Nobody can force anyone to read something you don't like. And you gave yourself into temptation, so like it is obvius that you were trying to stretch to no end this lovely story, I, who don't read works in progress, decide today, after three days reading your story, that isn't worth it go through the next chapters and read it complete.
    From saucy, sexy, funny turned into annoying, cheesy and an effort, not a joy to read it.
    And your tantrum from the begginning of this chapter? What, are you four? Or did you just merge with the Ron or the Romilda of the last three chapters?.Sorry, I think you just screwed it.
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  • From purefaith91 on April 26, 2012
    Excellent! You left out Alice though. She could have gotten together with old friends for grandchildren playdates and come to adore Millie for bringing her family into a real family once again. Grandma could have come around and visited Frank with Alice or Neville and quit being such a biddy (nah, that would not have been realistic). I was surprised that no one named their kids after Minerva, but brought honoring men into it...wizard driven society back then. Anyway, loved your story. A very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
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  • From purefaith91 on April 26, 2012
    First, I am sorry to say that I tried to review some chapters and the site would not let me. This is the happiest part of your story, although there were many other happy parts, I love this best. It would be nice to see how everyone else celebrates her recovery, but that has not really been spoken of outside of Neville and Millie, so don't expect it. Also love that Kim kept to her original and did not create problems where there were none. Great!! p
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  • From purefaith91 on April 25, 2012
    I love Harry so rarely think he is just plain wrong. I think that he was in this case though. Too bad those people don't all realize that Ron is the way he is because no one holds him accountable. They make excuses for him and just pretend he was not being a jerk when he finally comes around each time...disgusting! And Pansy said exactly what I have always thought, which hopefully made Harry think (I doubt it mind you because he would have to lay blame with Ron, and Ron is always blameless. Love Millie and think that she is just the advocate that Neville and his mom need. RV is getting scary though and I am afraid that she is going to hurt someone he loves. p
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  • From purefaith91 on April 25, 2012
    I think that I would be angry with Luna if I was George. It is not like he is the only one telling how Molly was acting. Yet it looked like she wanted him caught. I wish someone would stand up to her the way Neville stood up to Millie's father. Hate to say it, but Ron is the only one who has shown any backbone where his parents are concerned. Very uncharacteristic. I am sure that will be Fred and George's faults that he left instead of Ron being sick of her and his dad. Please don't let her get away with putting the guilt off on them without someone calling her on it. p
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  • From purefaith91 on April 25, 2012
    Now, if Molly was not such an overbearing busybody, it would have turned out to be a prank, as intended. She always has to stick her nose in and made it a big production AND his friends and family who know the real him, should not feel guilty. If it was done to someone else, Ron would probably hold them down for them. I am dreading Neville's grandmother. Reading on...p
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  • From purefaith91 on April 25, 2012
    A very Happy Christmas for NL, but I bet old grandma is going to have a cow. Maybe they can slip some sedation into her tea and she can keep her son company for 15 or 16 years. I love all of the couples you have put into place. Great. p
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  • From purefaith91 on April 25, 2012
    Boy, Neville's grandmother really is a biddy. If the opportunity for her son to get better existed, she would probably leave no stone unturned. Hopefully, grandma will "bite the big one" and Neville and Millie will take care of getting his mom therapy and she can be back in their lives. Great story so far. p
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  • From purefaith91 on April 24, 2012
    Beautiful. Luna is one of my favorite characters. She is so kind and gentle. Love that you have George recognize that. p
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  • From ANON - lily dee on February 07, 2012
    just to say i love the story i love marrige law fanfics and this is one of my favourites but i have to point it out its ZABINI not ZAMBINI sorry but it has been bugging me for the past few chapters...
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