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By : SiriuslyBwitched
  • From vannilla on October 10, 2008
    wow is a horrible understatement
    but seriously WOW
    very real
    very hot
    ....wow
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  • From ANON - the norwegian girl on September 04, 2008
    I really liked it! I wish you could make it into more than a oneshot though! =)
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  • From risotto on May 29, 2008
    Hey not bad. would have been better if it wasn't a one shot.
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  • From coonassblondie on May 28, 2008
    That was incredibly hot, and very well written!
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  • From slygriff21 on May 10, 2008
    Nice. I liked it. Hot, steamy. What's not to like.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - erin on April 25, 2008
    good story, you could write more on it if you wanted. The problem with on shots is that it always leaves the reader wanting more.
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  • From luvhp on October 22, 2007
    woo-hoo, that'd cheer me up, that's for sure.
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  • From BUCKYKATTGIRL on September 03, 2007
    You're right, oneshots do not get the attention they deserve! I especially love Sirius-Hermione one shots and this one is awesome! Good work!
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  • From lilbitbord on September 01, 2007
    Hot Hot Hot!!! Did I mention that this was hot?
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  • From Sekhmet on August 25, 2007
    Very very sexy...
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  • From Wickedswanz on August 25, 2007
    Wonderful!!
    Hot and Romantic and once again beautiful.
    I am quickly becoming a fan of your stories, so hurry up and give me more :D
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  • From Sampdoria on August 22, 2007
    A very, very good story, I hope you will make more of those. Though I follow several WIP, oneshots are a welcome change, its great to be able to have a complete story in one go sometimes. I will be sure to look for more stories by you:-))
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  • From acidqueen on August 22, 2007
    I also disagree that saying the summery is bad means less people will read it. I mean, i liked the summery you put with it, and if you felt that it was crap, then surly the actually story would be way better. I find that i am more likly to go look at a story if someone says their summery is crap, because it makes you wonder if it really is just crap and makes you ask the question 'how much better is the story?' but thats just me.

    Loved the writing and the voices and i cant wait to read more from you
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  • From acidqueen on August 22, 2007
    That was brill (did i just say brill? bugger)

    I really enjoyed this, i likeed how you made Hermione a wee bit of a drinker. It makes her fallable and so a little more human and easier for the reader to relate to. I prefer it when authers do that, because if you make Hermione perfect, i dont know, i feel like maybe they should just write a Mary-Sue (not that i have a problem with M-S's, but you know) and its something that i like to do because it makes her seem less like a preud. My thinking is, if you were Hermione dealing with War and Death and fearing for ones life, surly any normal teenager would turn to drinking, smoking or some other bad habit or vice to help regain some control in ones life. So, bravo!!!

    Also, man do i wish that i was there instead of Hermione...that is a night in i would not turn down!!

    I enjoyed it considerabally, and i am going off now to read your other story.


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  • From DarkLady on August 22, 2007
    People are more likely to read your story if you don't put them off by telling everyone your summary is bad. Because to be honest if you don't believe enough even in your summary no one will read your story.
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