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By : Natwestgirl
  • From ANON - Katrina on March 25, 2015
    It's re good email me if you write more
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  • From Selera on December 11, 2007
    I hope you continue this really I do. I found the ending of your last chapter absolutly hillarious.
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  • From PantherTO on November 29, 2007
    In Chapter 3, you switched names for Maj. Gen. Jacob Carter/Selmak. You switched from Jacob, to Jim. Here is an Example:

    Jacob could never handle personal problems well; he was a good candidate for Selmak, and no one else would leave family for all that time without some regret. No, not Jim.

    The use of Jim occures 3 times in total in Chapter 3. You started with the right Name, but got muddled somewhere.

    Also in Chapter 4, you have the following:

    The house elf’s name is Blinky and he’s already with your aunt.

    You changed the name of the Elf between Chapter 4 where it was Blinky, to Pinky/Brain in Chapter 5. Now I like the idea of a Elf with Multiple Personality Disorder, and the borrowing of the Lab Mice from Animaniacs. But as with Jacob/Jim change is not a good thing. A couple quick edits and you can fix Jim and Blinky and change them to Jacob and Pinky/Brain. Besides Blinky sounds like a Myopic Owl, not an elf.

    If you want to play with the Pinky/Brain characters, you can Remember the following about Pinky:

    Pinky is another genetically modified mouse who shares the same cage at Acme Labs, but is substantially less bright. He speaks with an exaggerated Cockney English accent. He frequently uses nonsensical interjections, such as "narf", "zort", "poit", and "troz" (the last of which Pinky started saying after noticing it was "zort in the mirror"). He also used "fjord" and "gnurf" on unique occasions, and "natch" in an episode set in the film noir era,[14] as well as "hark" in an episode that was partly set in the medieval era.

    For more read http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pinky_and_the_Brain The Sections on Characters and the Hallmark Section have interesting reading. While the M.P.D. Elf Pinky/Brian might only be for a few chapters, or who know, more than a few. You could probably try to include some true Pinky/Brain style interactions. Remember from the Pinky/Brain Music, "One is a genius, the other's insane", truely is Pinky and the Brain, not The Brain and Pinky.


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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on November 28, 2007
    very good the geneology is a little confusing but still great.
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  • From PrincessButtercup on November 27, 2007
    This as very very good. Please up date soon. It took me alittle but my brain just jot your little joke about the house elf. Ha!Ha! I loved it soom much. Please keep it up I am enjoying myself...
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  • From Jan on November 27, 2007
    Poor Sam, though I have to give her credit, I think I would have said something from the start, she waited a lot longer then anybody would of.

    Please update chapter 6 soon. ^_^
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 27, 2007
    Wonderful!!! I sooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From Dezra on November 26, 2007
    GREAT story, can't wait for future chapters. If you're starting a mailing list...I would like to be put on it.
    acraftycutie@yahoo.com
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  • From YanaYugi on November 26, 2007
    i hope they are not all going to the states with Harry
    i want Harry to have fun with his aunt first
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  • From PrincessButtercup on November 26, 2007
    I would like to start by saying that I love your story so far. I love Harry Potter and I love Stargate. When I was reading your story my mind was racing about the possibilities. Even though, at the point that you bring Sam into Harry's life, Stargate had not found out that Merlin was an Ancent, so it could be intrusting to have the possibility that wizereds are some form of what is left of the Ancents on earth. If you could please e-mail me when you up date so I could continue to follow your progress and if you would like to bounce some ideas off of me please done hessitate. Princessbuttercup80@yahoo.com
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 25, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 5! Sam isn't getting one wizard, she's getting 4 and she doesn't know about the magic. Oh my!
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  • From Griffyn on September 11, 2007
    Keep going don't stop now. Is there an update list? If there is can I be put on it please. Are you going to continue this story? It's really good and I can't wait to read more.

    Griffyn
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  • From sanda on August 24, 2007
    good story
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  • From bananasforyou on August 23, 2007
    seems cool!
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  • From MrGalion on August 23, 2007
    Interesting. I like how your harry is less trusting as the other harrys un fics seem.
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