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Reviews for Twenty-Four

By : MerenwenFefalas
  • From ANON - HD4eva on July 09, 2008
    reviewer # 3001142442...wtf?!
    Love, ignore the closet case idiot. This was great.
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  • From ANON - draco isnt gay on November 26, 2007
    DRACO MALFOY IS NOY GAY YOU STUPID F*CKEN B*TCH!! AND IF HE WAS IT WOUDLN'T BE WITH hARRY IT WOULD BE WITH SOMEONE BETTER LIKE bALISE NOT A GRIFFYNDOR! dRACO *N* pANSY 4VER B*TCH!q SLASH IS F*CKEN NASTY!

    iF dRACO WAS **GAY** HE WOULDN'T OF HAD A KID, DUMBASS1 YOUR PROBBALY GAY
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  • From MisstressNicole on August 24, 2007
    I'm starting to hate you. Why must you tease me so. You leave things off so, so, so wishy washy. As if what I want could happen but at the same time it could be just that, a dream, a wish. I liked how you did this, they were both grown men, and times change. Of course they do, but do they really. I mean Harry didn't blow him off this time, he accepted him, because like you wrote, people change, but still how do I know that they stayed happy? I guess I'll just have to use my imagination. You are a fantastic writer. You're word illuminate the page, drawing a reader in. The words seem so carefully chosen, as if you planned the line before and rewrote it after. If that makes any sense to you. You're stories are free of mistakes, uses punctuation and grammar correctly, it shows you put effort into it. I loved how you ended it even though it left me with a taste of something good in my mouth, something that had been snatched away before I could chew. Or perhaps I was just smelling it and never really tasted it in the first place. Wonderful story, I'll be looking forward to more from you.

    ~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 24, 2007
    Love this!
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  • From bananasforyou on August 23, 2007
    so koool i wish it wasnt a oneshot.
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  • From Annie on August 23, 2007
    I absolutely loved the tone and the atmosphere of this fic. It was heart wrenching for me when Draco subtly asked Harry that question, and I'm so glad Harry picked up on it. I love this story! :]
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