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Reviews for The Music Box

By : missbja
  • From ANON - mrs. malfoy on December 05, 2012
    hmm...this one is a little weak. Perhaps make characters a bit more believable and develop the back story?
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  • From luvhp on March 13, 2008
    That's it? It's over just like that.
    This was written beautifully, if not grammatically(sp?) correct.
    Maybe run it thorugh a beta and update it, some parts were hard to skim over as the sentence didn't quite make senses.
    Otherwise, Wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Verie on December 20, 2007
    On the First part of the story:
    Ooh that's nice.
    Very Light and re-freshening. It makes me want to float. HA!

    On the very recent Chapter:
    What's going to happen now? :S Ooh. I just have no clue. No clue at all.
    And that's a good thing.

    You will update right?
    Verie

    P.S. Happy Holidays!

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  • From Verie on December 18, 2007
    Was that the end of the story?

    I hope not. Its sweet, adorably sweet.
    It makes me smile in a silly way. Ha!

    You are going to put more chapters right? :)


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  • From bananasforyou on December 18, 2007
    nice!
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  • From AkashaTheKitty on September 03, 2007
    It's very cute.

    I'm no good around cute. Look, I'm blushing!!! *hides under the bed* Funny how I'm better with smut than cute...

    Oh, this didn't mean I didn't like it. I did. Very. I just felt like hiding under my bed, see?

    Waiting for update. ;)

    Love,

    ~Kitty
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  • From myangeldraco on August 27, 2007
    This sounds like a really good start to an excellent story and is written beautifully. Hope you update soon!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on August 27, 2007
    so cute more please!
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  • From ANON - maaike on August 26, 2007
    a very nice/sweet story so far. I hope there is more to come because i can't wait to read more. Is Draco really going to help hermione catch up on her missed homework, and what would happen or be reveiled when they are so close together? mmh don't wait to long with an update please
    maaike
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  • From linoy on August 26, 2007
    UPDATE SOON!!!
    Realy Like It!!!
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  • From vampyricwriter on August 26, 2007
    i like it, but you need to make the chapters a little longer.
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  • From Tenar10r on August 26, 2007
    Very nice
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