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Reviews for Mi Morena (loose translation: My Brunette)

By : shawnastar252
  • From ANON - Lily of Darkness on September 05, 2007
    I would be glad to beta this story for you, if you're still looking for one.

    Lily of Darkness
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - draegon_fire on August 31, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story so far. Hermione is definitely just as attracted to Severus, as he is with her. I wonder what his reaction would be like once he learns who she is. I hope he doesn't hate her for it. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From Darkwolf01 on August 31, 2007
    i like this. its hot, especally severus not knowing who the woman is, and i cant wait to read when he finds out. keep going, its really good!
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  • From ANON - Miladymegan on August 29, 2007
    Oh my gosh! So wonderful! I adore it. More please! I like the drawn out romance between them. Much better than a hurried one!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on August 27, 2007
    The story so far is amazing. The way it's told is sweet and achingly tender. And the way you show how each is vulnerable emotionally is perfect as you do so without being sappy. The sexual tension is perfect. That was a brilliant start and I cannot wait to read more. Good luck and please update soon.
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  • From JoanitheUniqueBeing on August 27, 2007
    i love your story so far update soon!!!!
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  • From Jen618 on August 26, 2007
    Lovely images. The only flaw in this tale is that, because it's at Hogwarts, and the woman is obviously young-ish(body wise) it's clearly a student, and he wouldn't just run off snogging and groping a student. But it's a nice story. Another setting might have given more scope for who the mystery woman was. Looking forward to the next bit.
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on August 26, 2007
    very hot
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  • From acidqueen on August 26, 2007
    This is a really beautiful story, and though i have never heard of that song, i am glad that it gave the idea for such an amazing story. It was emotive, and you described the characters wondefully. I can definetly see Hermione acting the way she did, and as for Snape, well the fact that he would be attracted to such an other worldly creature (as he sees her first time) and the mystery as to her identity.
    I am a little surprised that Snape did not work out that it was a student, or at least thought about the big possibility that it is a student.
    I really love this story, and i cannot wait to read more. All i can say is that it is beautiful, the very definition of the word in fact. I have not read a story before this, that could equal it in that respect.
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