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Reviews for The Greatest Gift

By : Sweetie
  • From Aragonsan on September 12, 2007
    Uh, considering the students don't stand up when the TEACHERS enter a room (or the Great Hall) how come they'll have to do so for a fellow student just because she happens to be married? I don't really get it.
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  • From barbarade on September 11, 2007
    Severus going to be a daddy, how great is that!
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 11, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on September 10, 2007
    i hope there not be any cheating going on because if severus cheats on her then he will need to be slaped and the same gose for hermione if she cheats on severus she will need to be slaped
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on September 05, 2007
    Excellent.
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  • From barbarade on September 05, 2007
    I just wish these two would talk about their fears and get on with making each other happy. Severus thinks he is doing what is best for Hermione but is truly hurtin himself and her.
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 04, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Jen618 on August 30, 2007
    Just a suggestion, in writing you normally begin a new paragraph each time someone else speaks. It makes it much easier to understand. If you look at the way experienced writers do it you'll see what I mean. As an example, you could change your para to look something like this.
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    Hermione made her way to Gryffindor table and found her seat in between Harry and Ron.
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  • From wicraven on August 30, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From Heidi191976 on August 30, 2007
    I liked this chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 30, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From wicraven on August 29, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From kmplease on August 29, 2007
    it was......AWESOME, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on August 29, 2007
    i like it! update soon!
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