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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on February 03, 2021

    A well written Harry/Ginny adult story.  Three things: lent is the past tense of lend; leaned (or maybe leant is the past tense of ‘to lean’.  Too many other spelling errors, have somebody read it before you post, don’tcount on spell check.  Last, I hated the end, withGinny leaving Harry hanging, not fair to either of them!  And Ginny should have been at quidditch practice, too!


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on August 08, 2020

    Okay, pet peeve time: spelling, spelling, spelling...and grammar!  If the author has an editor, he/she didn’t do their job.  While none of the mistakes were fatal to the story, they are distracting and often caused me to stop, go back, and reread, until I figured it out.

    i don’t know if this is a British vs American English thing, but one usage that drives me crazy is ‘lent’; it is the past tense of lend, not the past tense of lean.  That would be leant, or leaned.  

    Otherwise, good story about one way Harry and Ginny might have become a couple (always my favorite HP-verse pairing).  My only complaint about the story line is the abrupt ending!  Harry & Ginny went through a lot before they got together, I doubt either one of them would leave the other hanging if they had an option, at this stage, they’re trying to draw closer together, not frustrate each other!


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  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 24, 2020

    Nice story, as good a start to the H/G relationship as any I’ve read.  Again, editing is a problem, or whatever spell-check your using is filling in the wrong word here and there.

    I’m a Yank, not a Brit, so I know there are some differences in spelling and usage, but one that I keep coming across, in more than one story, is “lent”.  “Lent” is the past tense of “lend”; “leant” (or leaned) is the past tense of “lean”.  It’s easy enough to read over or figure out, so it’s not a fatal error, but it’s still a distraction.

    Keep writing, you’ve got a lot of potential, but have a couple of different sets of eyes give it a read through before you post!


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