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By : WonderBritney
  • From alma on July 17, 2008
    Cute chapter.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 17, 2008
    lol. i like it! update soon guys
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  • From NightLo on July 17, 2008
    Hum...actually Harry's bad luck last as long as his own car gets fixed, which would be....how much longer?
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  • From ANON - redlightspin on July 17, 2008
    another chapter NOW!!! pwretty ppllease!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2008
    oh please update. and soon.

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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 16, 2008
    if these guys are just meeting and draco never told him that his name was "Malfoy" then how did Harry know to call him that and whats up with him being so submissive its kind of a mood killer.
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  • From TatsuTipatico on April 19, 2008
    love the story^^ I hope you update again soon!!
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  • From on February 19, 2008
    You should deffinately update again very soon! I've loved this from the first sentence.
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  • From MisstressNicole on February 16, 2008
    I don't know what took me so long to read this but it's good. Wait, yes I do. I'm the beta for the Coven and a free lance beta. I've been hellishly busy. *grunts* But now that I have time, after staying up all night, I'm glad I read it. It is very well written and attention grabbing. I loved that how even though we knew it was Draco from the beginning that it wasn't revealed until the middle of the second chapter. I like that Harry is the shy, quick to blush...blushing virgin (?). And I love the confidence that Draco projects. It's abso-fucking-lutely amazing.

    I generally don't start a story that is a WIP until it's about ten or so chapters in. That way, if it's good I don't feel like I'm waiting for the next chapter. Right now I'm kicking myself for breaking my own rule. I don't want to rush you but I would like you to know that I'm waiting for the next chapter. I like the way it's progressing and the flow is beautiful. For this to be written by two people you guys are perfectly in sync. Harry's and Draco's character were established in the first chapter and it followed into the next. So far there are no inconsistencies in personality and that's great. There were no awkward errors in information that many co-op stories have. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

    Nikki
    MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - redlightspin on February 16, 2008
    as long as you keep writing this story I don't care if you put a glove on your head and run around naked screaming "look at me i'm a squid!!", SO START WRITNG THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!must know how harry's molested next.
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  • From ANON - Rempadfoot on February 15, 2008
    Well that was different I like it^_^
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  • From danradfan84 on February 14, 2008
    OMG, I love this story so far. I so cannot wait for the next chapter. I think it's hilarious, the first time Harry went on the bus, that is how it is here, especially when the bus is going to the ferry terminal, it's such a pain when the bus is packed. Anyways, I love this story, as I said before.
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  • From missleymisskai on February 14, 2008
    More Please. :D

    ~Ley
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  • From ANON - Cedi Luvdon on February 14, 2008
    this story is really cute. I can't wait for the next chapt. I love arrogant!Draco and flustered! cute! Harry. Draco said commoners, is he like some prince or duke or something?
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  • From ANON - SP777 [don't wanna sign in] on February 09, 2008
    Ahhh...*stretches leisurely*

    ANOTHER humorous story I can work with. :-)
    You guys are doing pretty good with the direction you're going thus far. I think I like an amorous, persistent Draco in the pursuit of 'happyness'. ;-)

    Despite Harry's need to kill said blonde...
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