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Reviews for The Rules of Life

By : BlindedHP
  • From DamiaEternal on September 01, 2007
    This was a very good fic and don't worry I've seen people with English as their first language with much more grammar errors than I saw in that fic. *shrug* I'm a prime example. I can't wait to see your next update till then. -Amara
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  • From anniea on September 01, 2007
    if there were any spelling and grammar mistakes i didn't pick up on any so no worries. please update soon this seems very good.
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  • From myniephoenix on September 01, 2007
    fantastic first chapter. it is so long and really really good. update soon.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on September 01, 2007
    Very nice. I wonder how Severus will react when he finds our that Harry's last name is Potter. I am looking forward to seeing what will happen next.

    Update soon
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  • From In2Deep on September 01, 2007
    This looks pretty good so far! but just how old is Harry? I dont think that you ever really stated his age... Hope to see an up-date soon!

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  • From MidnightLilly on August 31, 2007
    write more, poor kid that's just sick, using children in that way
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  • From DarkGothic on August 31, 2007
    for english not being your native language, you wrote rather well... better than some of my friends and relatives who grew up speaking english. Anyway, your story is off to a nice start, I hope you update soon.
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  • From serenagold on August 31, 2007
    This was a very promising first chapter.

    Keep up the good work. English may be your second language, but your command of it is alot better than many native English speakers that I know. ^^
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  • From Bastian on August 31, 2007
    I really like this so far. I hope you keep updating and going with it. If you don't have a beta I wouldn't mind doing it for you my email is shinji.fukushima@yahoo.com.

    There were a few mistakes but they mainly looked like you were typing to fast and accidentally changed the meaning on the word or the pretense. It was good though I will be keeping an eye on it.
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  • From lazycrazykitten on August 31, 2007
    English isn't your first language? That's really funny as I am English and your spelling and grammer is better than mine. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kermit on August 31, 2007
    Can't wait for ch 2
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  • From Leentjef on August 31, 2007
    this was very very good beginning
    and your english is very good
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From xLyracax on August 31, 2007
    english may not be your first language, but you have a better grasp of it than some people who have been reading and writing it their whole lives. congrats, great story.
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  • From ANON - Extraho on August 31, 2007
    this is very intresting. i wonder how sev will react when he finds out thatthe boy is in fact Harry potter.
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  • From ANON - js on August 31, 2007
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
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